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A Vanishing Dream

His silver tongue was tarnished by frequent Freudian slips. And in a drunken stupor, truth escaped his lying lips. During a tear-filled moment, I coated his heart with trust. But now its metal's showing, and it's beginning to rust. I'm lost in love's labyrinth, fraught with pain that never numbs. Yet, taken in by his charms, my heart readily succumbs. Within his reality, pleasure dictates what feels right. And I am scared he'll leave me, should I ever hold too tight. My frustrated feelings are reduced to a silent scream. And I continue chasing hope; through a vanishing dream. (Quatrain) 10/29/2015

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Date: 3/14/2018 2:30:00 PM
I love this line "Hope's lost in love’s labyrinth" as much as your closing stanza. Well done, Emile.
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Date: 3/14/2018 3:32:00 PM
Thanks Line, your comments are always welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/9/2015 9:41:00 PM
Emile again, so beautiful, loved the imagery, I have been away in Paris, and so just catching up on some reading! I also posted a few photos on the blog part here, if you wish to see! Cheers!
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Date: 11/10/2015 8:05:00 AM
Thanks Arthur, welcome back, I trust your stay was an enjoyable one. Emile.
Date: 10/29/2015 12:11:00 PM
a sensitive portrayal of relational issues so well rendered... enticed, emile.. huggs
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/30/2015 8:31:00 AM
Thanks Nette, I appreciate your visit. Emile.

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