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A Valentine Wedding

Grab hold! You're on the threshold of A wedding on this day of love! A splendid life made just for two - A life for soul mates just like you. A day for Valentines to say Forever vows! You're on your way. But even if joy fills your heart, From now on, you must do your part. . . For things of value are not free. You must be working constantly At doing all the things you know Are vital for your love to grow. Your wedded bliss is up to you. There’s more to it than just “I do.” Grab hold! You’re on the threshold of A splendid life. Fate’s brought you love! Written 9/12/2012 and revised 1/28/2016 for the contest of Mystic Rose

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/6/2016 10:35:00 AM
Andrea, Congratulations on your "VALENTINE POEM OF YOUR CHOICE win!!!" LINDA
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Date: 2/3/2016 8:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement Andrea. Marriage does take effort to make it work.
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Date: 2/3/2016 11:41:00 AM
Nice poem, Andrea. Congratulations on your Nice win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/2/2016 10:51:00 PM
Andrea,, Congratulations on your Valentine win. Love **SKAT**
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Date: 2/2/2016 10:46:00 PM
Loved it, Andrea. Hugs, Bobby
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Date: 2/2/2016 9:30:00 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea!
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Date: 2/2/2016 5:59:00 PM
Beautifully expressed Andrea congrats on your win ... I would have loved to see the original of the poem and see how it evloved:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/2/2016 5:51:00 PM
Congratulations on this win! Great advice.
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Date: 2/2/2016 5:24:00 PM
Andrea, congrats on your placement in the contest *Smiles* -luloo
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Date: 9/5/2013 4:08:00 PM
Wow, what an incredible poem. Wonderful message, wonderful rhyme, wonderful meter. This is a truly amazing poem.
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Date: 11/18/2012 10:27:00 AM
Soupmail.....
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Date: 10/3/2012 7:54:00 PM
Congrats on your win and so true, Love Debra
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Date: 10/2/2012 9:14:00 AM
Lovely! Just all that has to be said to young lovers about all that comes along with feelings: everyday life's traps to be escaped ... My son is getting married soon and I 'm a bit worried...:) Love, Hanitra ...BTW, I don't find your clerihews up to now. I keep on trying to.
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Date: 10/1/2012 9:19:00 AM
Congratuaions andy this is really nic xx
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Date: 10/1/2012 6:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Janette's "When Fate Decides" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/30/2012 7:33:00 PM
Good work! You always do a great sonnet! Congrad's on your win Light & Love
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Date: 9/30/2012 1:46:00 PM
Love that attitude - grab hold. With two hands. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/20/2012 1:55:00 PM
Love your poem and I am sure Janette will as her daughter became engaged. Yes there is more to life than I do. Wonderful write love phyl
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Date: 9/15/2012 2:30:00 PM
love this sweet write, my friend - and such truth here
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Date: 9/14/2012 8:08:00 PM
Excellent write and advice Andrea....thanks for such a sweet comment on mine, we should have wrote this one together : ) Hugs
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Date: 9/14/2012 12:54:00 PM
You've made Janette's decision making a bit tougher with this fine entry.
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Date: 9/13/2012 11:32:00 PM
very nice to read before I go to sleep,,,,, thank you for reading "my son" poem ;} sweet dreams ;}
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Date: 9/13/2012 10:28:00 PM
nice reading this one again..pd
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Date: 9/13/2012 8:43:00 PM
Another great poem here!Yes Marriage is decided by fate..excellent way to do the contest.
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Date: 9/13/2012 3:10:00 PM
Good far-reaching advice for the newlyweds. Been married 62 years - it only took me 35 to discover what you've written about here. Love, daver
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