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- a Twelve Months Pregnancy -

Hello January A whole year is over A pregnancy of twelve months with all the symptoms Time is running like a marathon The birth is started The new year is here again with new hope expectations- joy and tears Burning colorful stars flashes in our eyes Fireworks in the sky like the sunlight gives a warm pleasure Just a few seconds All the church bells ringing Smile ... kisses and hugs We are ready - we are waiting Please welcome the newborn year Sponsor:Vicky Tsiluma Contest Name:Hello January Deadline:2/1/2014 12:00:00 AM 18.01.2014 A-L Andresen :)

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Gail Debole

Date: 3/12/2014 5:24:00 PM

Excellent title. The way you express this concept is charming and so creatively honest! - Love, Gail

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/13/2014 3:35:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Gail. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Emmanuel Brian Oule

Date: 2/15/2014 2:39:00 PM

Fireworks in the sky, i loved that stanza and yes New resolutions, Like mine is to complete my screenplay, Already im writing my third movie..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/15/2014 4:30:00 PM

- Thanks for the S-mail.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/15/2014 4:29:00 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments. - Good luck with your work,Bryan. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kathryn Collins

Date: 2/1/2014 8:59:00 AM

Oh my gosh Anne Lise - Your words sing in this creative gem. I love 12 month pregnancy. Bravo! love, Kathy

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/1/2014 9:29:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Kathryn. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sarai Virden

Date: 2/1/2014 5:30:00 AM

Loved your metaphor. Didn't know what to expect and was swept away by the beauty of your message. A wonderful write sweetie.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/1/2014 6:26:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Sarai. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/31/2014 10:03:00 PM

This is a very original piece. I had no idea what to expect from the Title, and my curiosity was pleasantly rewarded!! A great poem!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/1/2014 6:25:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Arthur :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Darren Watson

Date: 1/29/2014 3:16:00 AM

When I saw the headline I thought , ''Never '' That poor woman . lol Delighted I opened the poem . Thoroughly enjoyed it .

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/29/2014 3:21:00 AM

....lol.. - Highly appreciate your visit and comments, Darren. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Rogers

Date: 1/28/2014 12:18:00 AM

Very nice metaphor, you had me going for a minute!...smile. Nice work! Anne -Lise xoxoxo Robert

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/28/2014 2:51:00 AM

- Highly appreciate your visit and comments, Robert. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Chuck Melugin

Date: 1/24/2014 2:19:00 PM

Leaving 2013 exhausted but the baby is beautiful, just like your poetry! Hugs, chuck

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/24/2014 2:20:00 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Chuck. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak

Date: 1/24/2014 7:19:00 AM

This is very creative. Great comparison between birth and a new year. Should do well in the contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/24/2014 11:57:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Monterey. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 1/23/2014 7:03:00 AM

An excellent creative write!!! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/23/2014 7:54:00 AM

Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Pace INK. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Deepak Chalise

Date: 1/23/2014 6:56:00 AM

The way you put words for new year is welcoming. INCLINATION TOWRADS SPIRIT AND LOVE IS LIFE.This is the hub of poem how a poet adorns it. I loved very much. .

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/23/2014 7:54:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Deepak. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Don Johnson

Date: 1/22/2014 5:11:00 PM

a very different new year concept... very well done too xoxox

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/23/2014 2:13:00 AM

Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Don. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/22/2014 4:42:00 PM

Nice way to bring in Jan. and a new year. I have been good so far this year from my winter flu. I am hopeful this will be a new and well year for me. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/23/2014 2:13:00 AM

Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Phyllis. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 1/22/2014 3:27:00 PM

Very good AnneLise. I do welcome the baby new year. I hope you a year full of blessings.... Lucilla

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/23/2014 2:12:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Lucilla. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/21/2014 8:40:00 AM

Enjoyed your expressions on January and congrats on the win, Anne

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/21/2014 8:42:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and greetings, Dr.Ram. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 1/21/2014 8:23:00 AM

this is excellent Anne Lise it brought some much needed sunshine Shadow x smile hug

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/21/2014 8:28:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Shadow. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 1/21/2014 6:37:00 AM

Awesome piece friend Anne :) ;) Congratulations on your win. I been very busy these past few days due to the deadline of my final exam. Miss to read some of your poems. Happy New year. hugs :) ;)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/21/2014 6:44:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and greetings, Maria. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/20/2014 10:38:00 PM

I hope this one placed for you. I just saw the contest was judged. it sure is a delightful and creative poem in the contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/21/2014 3:30:00 AM

Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Andrea. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Edward Orozco

Date: 1/20/2014 10:06:00 PM

Awesome poem!! Enjoyed this very much!! -Eddie

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/21/2014 3:29:00 AM

Edward Orozco

Date: 1/20/2014 9:16:00 PM

Awesome poem!! Enjoyed this very much!! -Eddie

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/21/2014 3:29:00 AM

Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Edward. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/20/2014 6:20:00 PM

A firework of a poem! Joyful and captivating, hopeful and thought provoking. Yes, we should celebrate each year since we are alive! Excellent work ! Good luck dear Anne Lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/21/2014 3:28:00 AM

Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Demetrios. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)