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A 'Trip' To the Mall - Xxx

After parking I busted my ass Cut my elbows and knees on some glass What was my first thought? “Quick! Scan the whole lot To make sure no one saw you, JACKASS”

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James Fraser

Date: 6/17/2015 2:32:00 PM

So many have tripped, fallen, and yes, we do tend to look around, love this Tim, James.... :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/11/2015 11:13:00 PM

Haha...this gave me a great laugh Tim. How the ego pushes through pain.

Monterey Sirak

Date: 6/10/2015 7:03:00 AM

I've done this so much, I just sit on the ground and laugh. The best was in Nashville at the Country Music Walk Of Fame. I tripped and ended up face down on one of the stars! If you are going to be clutzy, do it with style.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/8/2015 3:54:00 PM

hahaha. Yes, we all do that when we fall in public.A great visual one, my friend.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/8/2015 10:57:00 AM

It seem each time I make a fool of my self I am amidst many people and when I do something right not a person is in sight. Fun Limerick!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/8/2015 7:19:00 AM

tim, you are on fun roll... i like your effervescent wit!.. how are you?... temp here is 88 degrees and my TPS tech difficulties continue... huggs!

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/8/2015 6:52:00 AM

HAHAHA ohh man, I'd laugh, then I'd help you up. Hugs xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/8/2015 6:11:00 AM

- A great an fun lim. Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 6/8/2015 4:35:00 AM

OUCH! ha ha ha great limerick:-) Hugs Jan xx 7

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/8/2015 4:18:00 AM

tim, you are on fun roll... i like your effervescent wit!.. how are you?... temp here is 88 degrees and my TPS tech difficulties continue... huggs!

Tim Ryerson
Date: 6/8/2015 4:52:00 AM

Doing well my friend! We are already in the 90's here in South Louisiana with KILLER humidity to go with it. We only have 3 seasons here...Hot, Hotter and DAMN this heat! Will Soup Mail you soon...