A Tree Standing In a Distant Field

stark,leafless,lifeless in a sculptured pose there,in silent silhouette- summer's shaded bleachers

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/15/2012 9:10:00 PM

Hey, Congratulations for your win. sorry I am seeing that so late! (just love the way you did your last line for this one)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/15/2012 3:57:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Good choice of words..Sara

Christopher Bunton

Date: 3/13/2012 3:41:00 PM

Congratulations!

Kash Poet

Date: 3/13/2012 11:54:00 AM

Congrats Brian on your win.Very nice Kimo.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/13/2012 5:34:00 AM

Congratulations for your placement in this contest Brian. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/12/2012 5:53:00 PM

a joy to sit under I am sure! Congrad's Light & Love

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/12/2012 5:17:00 PM

wonderful Brian, really paints a picture. congrats on your placement. harry

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/11/2012 5:23:00 PM

So unique, it is! Last line, takes such an interesting turn! Love it! ps.. I do not take for granted the kind honor when I place in your contests, Brian. Thank you for my placement in the last Verse Contest, and thank you for continued support from my start as a poet 4 years ago. I've learned much from you. :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/6/2012 11:27:00 PM

you paint a stark scene so vividly hued by your gliding quill, brian... greeat job with winning huggs!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2012 10:55:00 PM

wow, I was not expecting that last line, Brian. I'm glad I saw this one tonight before it scrolled off the page. NICELY done.