A Timeless Love

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So young, we climbed a distant hill, to carve a heart upon a tree. Left in the bark, this love engraved has aged with time, and so have we; but can't erase the spark or thrill. _____________________________________________ 8/3/15 For "Micropoetry" contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/7/2015 9:38:00 PM

Congrats, Carrie. Could swear I saw yours before but am not seeing my comment down here.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/7/2015 4:20:00 PM

((())) Puppy Love Congrats! :>) SK

James Inman

Date: 8/7/2015 8:37:00 AM

Beautiful poem, Carrie.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/7/2015 8:27:00 AM

One of my favorites, congratulations.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/7/2015 4:41:00 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations Carrie:-) hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley

Date: 8/7/2015 1:14:00 AM

I'm faving this, it strikes a chord, Carrie. Thanks, Viv x

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/7/2015 12:25:00 AM

Congrats on ur awesome winning brilliant write Carrie! Took me back in timeline!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/6/2015 11:55:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Carrie! Very beautiful write that I enjoyed reading! It's all about Puppy Love! Pandita

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/6/2015 8:18:00 PM

I thought that "left in the bark" was perfect for puppy love..whether it was intended or not this was cute! It did go over the character count for the contest, but I really did love it!

Carrie Richards
Date: 8/6/2015 8:31:00 PM

Thanks very much, Casarah.....Sorry if I counted wrong.....I will double check....I thought I had met the 140 requirement, . But thank you for the HM, and not eliminating :)