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A Suicide Story

A room silent and filled with pain
I'm about to go insane
My head can't think of anything
Except the heartache this day brings
Why does this happen way to often
Flowers placed upon a coffin
Of a sad and innocent soul
That just went out of control
Not knowing to ask for help
Trapped and lost inside herself
Keeping pain locked up inside
Till she could no longer hide
From a past of pain and torture
She can't deal with no longer
A single bullet in a gun
One loud shot and it is done
Friends, co-workers and family
Question why they could not see
The demons in this young girls heart
Tearing her whole world apart
Building up until the day
She made it all go away
Blood dripping on walls and floor
Nothing hurts her anymore

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  1. Date: 7/12/2014 4:53:00 AM
    Extremely sad Robin,, beautiful write,, congrats on win!

  1. Date: 7/11/2014 9:39:00 PM
    Well written...Kim

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 5:04:00 PM
    Hello Robin stopping by this one again, I posted A new poem called..."white picket fence"... I hope. you stop by when you have the chance. Please enjoy my newest post. ..luv...linda

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 8:48:00 AM
    This is so sad and yet well expressed.

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 8:07:00 PM
    Robin, wow... I don't like the suicide subject... but it is out there.. OUCH... on the way she ended things... not the kind of ending i like.. sad.. love this one..Linda

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 1:01:00 PM
    A poem that shows and sells pain like no other! Suicide tears a quite soul apart and brings innocence down! A very real poem that shows the pain some go through, but no one really knows, they only think they know how it feels! A wonderful poem, another tear has been sheded and another tissue used to wipe away sadness! Good write! :) xoxo hugs and kisses all around my dear Robin! :)

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 9:46:00 AM
    Another piece that shows REAL events that happen day by day, unseen I really admire how you tackle socio-cultural issues in your creative work.

  1. Date: 10/4/2013 10:19:00 PM
    Wow, Robin, this is an incredible poem, tragic and sad! I was holding my breath while reading and didn't even realize it. I agree with Thomas. This is very powerful. Love and blessings, Rhonda