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A Stroke of Perfection

I sat in front of an empty canvass the other day, Thinking of the perfect portrait in which I wanted to portray, I began, and subconsciously I preceded to perfect my stroke, Molding wonders until I hit a block, and my art began to choke, Attempting to find myself within the collage of thoughts my brain created, Getting weary though I watch my hands as they are unabated, I try to consummate my masterpiece, but I lacked proper formation, My creation was deficient without any present inspiration, Though the colors were all of beauty, I found no amazement in my work, I wanted to see the bigger picture, yet my eyes were consumed by murk, I introverted the inner thoughts within my mind, To grasp the feeling of a stunning work of art I'd hope to find, Restrained by the idea of what I felt to be perfection, Merely lacking understanding of my art's nonexistent affection, As I meditate on my shortcomings the image is surely clear, The raw emotion of my mental art is bigger than it appears, As I alleviate my mind, I close my eyes to find a clue, Mental images of your physical features start to cloud my view, I chiseled jaw, facial hair, a coat of chocolate brown or two, The perfect portrait lacks perfection without the image that is you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/30/2015 11:35:00 PM
you amazed me with this....I am so glad that I did not miss....my chance to read your art....that skill can only come from the heart....wow
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Jamilah Myle
Date: 7/30/2015 11:40:00 PM
Thanks love, I highly appreciate that. I love poetry with all my heart.....it's my baby. Thanks for the read!

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