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A Stormy Night

A stormy night, Wild winds and thunder bolts Jolt the tin-shed homes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/14/2011 9:45:00 AM
a good visual of a stormy night, enjoyed your haiku,..p.d.
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Date: 6/14/2011 8:17:00 AM
A well-drawn picture in a few words, with socially important referents...I would add one syllable to the second line (to total the seven usually required of haiku...) Good work!
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Date: 6/14/2011 7:15:00 AM
I can see clearly the visual with images you have created with words, Asif
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