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A Sonnet On It It comes and goes on idle vagrant winds hitching rides in briar like dependence under pressure its aimless trek will bend for it is not concerned with making sense. So does it guard its anonymity its preference - stay lost amid the stir sought after for its ambiguity as evil lout or ever faithful cur. However, it may change with careful groom take on an aura larger then its self become the centerpiece of crowded room festooned with all the trappings of its wealth. Coyly fan itself beneath its bonnet listening as others read its sonnet. 5/18/2016 submitted to – Pen A Sonnet On It – Poetry Contest sponsor – Janis Thompson

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Date: 6/9/2016 9:41:00 PM
Excellent sonnet. Every word flowed with ambition, leading message and great rhyme... Adding to my fav list, great sonnet...A7
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