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A Slight Breeze

A slight drizzle of rain earthbound From dark heavy gray clouds Sheer fog still cloaks the creek hollow Thunder rumbled close and loud A rainy day is needed now For plants had begun to dry The moisture will be delightful For some had begun to die Closer~closer the thunder rolls The rain more steady flows Only a slight breeze stirs the air Rooster and Dove put on show Now a river flows through the yard Thunder round after round Frogs sing competing to win show The rain soft cymbal's sound The frogs a loud bass trio tune In time with the rain's beat Their song charmingly a deep croon A lover's desire heats Written Wednesday, July 31, 2013

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Date: 8/5/2013 5:41:00 PM
Oh, this is very nice indeed Sara ;}
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Date: 8/2/2013 1:20:00 AM
love this, my friend, so beautiful. Congrats on your wins : )
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Date: 8/1/2013 8:39:00 PM
Wow, this is such a natural and ingenious write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this evening! You have pleased me by the splendor of this incredible piece! What an excellent poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 8/1/2013 5:33:00 PM
- Here is no slight breeze ..... very, very hot in Turkey! - At home in Norway it is rain and thunderstorms - A good poem to read from you Sara. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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