A Simple Wish

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A treasured love that brings such cheer That makes me smile when I'm alone Such joy to keep forever near For hope no less than mine to own...

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/15/2016 1:28:00 AM

:) Light and beautiful...Cheers the heart, Charlie. Thanks for sharing. It's so good to think of a treasure love and feel...joy.

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/15/2016 7:07:00 AM

I'm so glad you liked it Eileen. I think a lite little lift is a good thing. We need more of them...

Jan Allison

Date: 8/9/2016 7:01:00 AM

simply beautiful Charlie:-) hugs Jan xx

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/9/2016 11:01:00 AM

Thank you Jan...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/6/2016 9:14:00 PM

what a darling little poem and the picture that goes with it too!

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/6/2016 10:03:00 PM

Thanks Ms Andrea, so glad you came to visit...

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/6/2016 8:51:00 AM

People tend to make the simple so complicated. Thanks for distilling thought to its essence.

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/6/2016 12:22:00 PM

I'm a simple man given to trying to be understood. Life can be full of complications, why would one choose to add more. Thank you Richard for appreciating poetry that doesn't require a map...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/5/2016 3:32:00 PM

- Beautiful thought in your poem Charlie, enjoy it :) - I wish you a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/5/2016 8:58:00 PM

Thank you My Dear and the same to you...