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A Simple Chance

I tell you that I love you That I want to get with you You tell me you like me Although not enough to go out with me Yet you keep going with other guys Guys that treat you like garbage That make you cry You say you want to stay single Yet you’re with him When he’s just playing you You give him one too many chances When I just ask for one All I need to make you happy is a simple Chance

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/30/2009 5:03:00 AM
Nicely exclaimed finish, rather wasn't sound in the context. Good try, you have the potential to improve this.
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Date: 3/29/2009 12:58:00 AM
A simple chance to make her happy and she won't give it to you, her loss, Welcome to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy your stay...Raul
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Date: 3/29/2009 12:45:00 AM
Aw, how sad and sweet, I'm always that girl that someone says "if i didn't have a girlfriend, i'd date you" its so heart wrenching, great write though....Aleera
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