Get Your Premium Membership

A Significant Elegance

I marvel at her elegance elegance born of an understanding an esthetic awareness, the knowing of who she is She embraces both the beauty and limitations of her form Wearing what pleases her no longer putting pretty things away for some future occasion Her clothing creates movement for she does not wish to stay still I see her eyes sparkle with the eagerness of yesterday's child the exuberance of her endless possibilities Still a subtle sadness resides a warning of sorts an "approach with caution" "come to me, but keep your distance" perhaps she feels safer that way Maybe this is part of her aesthetic for music cannot exist without tension notes are born of apposing forces So I will ask my questions attempt to understand I will hear what she wishes to tell and I will try to comprehend Most importantly I will appreciate her elegance the freedom she finds within her laughter Her inquisitiveness as she peers over her glasses for she is both a teacher and a student life for her remains and adventure and she chooses to live it one note at a time until she has written her symphony until she has painted all of her colors until she realizes that pain serves a purpose Without it we never truly become we never truly know who we really are

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/16/2016 9:37:00 AM
Richard, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my blog "SEIZE THE DAY." Celebrate with me. WUV **SKAT**
Login to Reply
Date: 10/22/2015 8:51:00 AM
I love the content of this one. Elegant, easy flowing, deep and enjoyed to read this beautiful piece in my relaxing night :) have a great day Rick, hug, yanny
Login to Reply
Lamoureux Avatar
Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/22/2015 9:15:00 AM
Hi Yanny, what a pleasant treat to have you visit me. I hope you are well sunshine!
Date: 9/27/2015 1:01:00 AM
This is brilliant, Richard! Really enjoyed reading this one. Always, Laura
Login to Reply
Lamoureux Avatar
Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/27/2015 7:21:00 AM
Thanks Laura, greatly appreciated.
Date: 9/24/2015 11:16:00 AM
The write itself lends elegance to the subject in my mind, Rick. A careful and poetic commentary on a lady who has captured and inspired at the same time your muse to another level. Great tribute! hugs
Login to Reply
Lamoureux Avatar
Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/25/2015 5:46:00 AM
Another great comment from you Kim. Thanks;0)
Date: 9/24/2015 10:39:00 AM
Ahhh... Your poems are waxing deep... A very interesting write.
Login to Reply
Lamoureux Avatar
Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/25/2015 5:46:00 AM
Thanks Carol!
Date: 9/24/2015 8:07:00 AM
This is great. So many people hide within themselves, but this one, she shines. living an adventure-until she realized that pain serves a purpose-admirable..intriguing. :)
Login to Reply
Lamoureux Avatar
Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/24/2015 9:35:00 AM
Thanks Casarah, she is an interesting woman.
Date: 9/22/2015 4:08:00 PM
She is truly a remarkable lady and you captured her well in a short time. A person well worth knowing and a loving one who is not too quick to show her emotions and you brought them out in her in a short time. Well written and very insightful on reality and not a fantasy as most poems can be. Glad you were home and miss you already Love Mom
Login to Reply
Lamoureux Avatar
Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/24/2015 4:10:00 AM
I miss you to mom, thanks for this beautiful response. I enjoyed meeting your friend, she is an interesting person and I can see how much your relationship means to her. Love ya!
Date: 9/22/2015 11:00:00 AM
What a creative clever assessment of this woman Richard. Observing, listening, trying to capture who she is. So vibrant a personality with underlying pains serving a purpose balancing a realization of who are. You almost have to put your psychiatrist hat on to create and pen this deep and excellent write. Loved it Richard a 7 for sure.
Login to Reply
Lamoureux Avatar
Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/24/2015 5:08:00 AM
Hi Michael, thanks for another thoughtful comment. Your insight is appreciated.
Date: 9/22/2015 7:44:00 AM
No question your poetic ability has taken flight for higher ground, dear Richard! A 7!
Login to Reply
Trifiatis Avatar
Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/22/2015 7:53:00 AM
Do not worry! Look lower, I will be there!
Lamoureux Avatar
Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/22/2015 7:46:00 AM
Thanks Demetrios, the one I wrote today may be a bit lower ground.
Date: 9/21/2015 1:35:00 AM
A fantastic poem ! You never cease to amaze me, Richard.
Login to Reply
Lamoureux Avatar
Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/21/2015 7:02:00 AM
You are sweet Charmaine.
Date: 9/20/2015 2:45:00 PM
Great write, Richard. Lovely
Login to Reply
Lamoureux Avatar
Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/21/2015 7:04:00 AM
Thanks.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things