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A Shooting Star

Everytime I look up the sky Everytime I feel like floating away Everytime I want to push harder than before Everytime I play P-square songs so I can have the right mood to write about you Everytime I appreciate you in my life I appreciate our language that nobody else understands Our wishes find themselves somewhere up there Everytime we close our eyes. And everytime we open our eyes Your sunshine reflection Your moonlight affection Is always there The tendon of our love never loses connection

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Darlene Gifford

Date: 8/6/2015 9:34:00 PM

You have been very busy writing many poems this month and last. And I am enjoying reading them. Loved this one, too. I don't see many shooting stars, but the night sky covered with stars always is a wonder to me. As if their twinkling says, "Hi" . A 7 Your friend, Darlene

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 8/9/2015 3:52:00 AM

Thank you Darlene for your sweet comment. Have a good day

Ian Jones

Date: 8/4/2015 4:30:00 AM

Lovely expressive write. Loved the lines Everytime I feel like floating away and Your moonlight affection. Soulful phrasing. Hugz Ian

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 8/6/2015 7:35:00 AM

Thank u Ian. I appreciate the visits to my poems. God bless you