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Medusa's Locks

Thrashing like Medusa's locks, water-whipped kelp lash, and flay. And angry waves pummel rocks, morphing into a salt spray. The sky's a cauldron of clouds, filled with a seething witch's brew. And heaven's draped in dark shrouds; not a single star shines through. As lightning ignites the dark, thunderclaps make the ground quake. And gusty winds leave their mark as debris swirls in their wake. The moon, a shade of curie, can't pierce the clouds with its beam. And trees fearing its fury, bow when the storm gets extreme. The wind wails throughout the night, filling rivers with its tears. And exhausted, by dawn's light; it suddenly disappears. (Quatrain) 2/27/2015

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Date: 3/10/2018 5:42:00 PM
Fabulous imagery, Emile. Love "The monster wails through the night filling rivers with its tears. Yet exhausted by dawn’s first light it suddenly disappears." Well done.
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Date: 3/6/2015 2:55:00 AM
Emile, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/6/2015 7:55:00 AM
Thanks, it's always nice to have you visit me. Emile.
Date: 3/5/2015 6:34:00 PM
I can feel its fury! Great write, sire. Congratulations! :D Kim
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Date: 3/5/2015 7:40:00 PM
Thanks so much for your visit Kim, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 3/5/2015 11:59:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Emile:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/5/2015 1:22:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 3/5/2015 7:38:00 AM
Powerful images of a raging storm, Emile. I could feel its force in your words. Congratulations on your win! Sandra
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Date: 3/5/2015 9:17:00 AM
Thanks Sandra, you are always so kind. Emile.
Date: 3/5/2015 7:08:00 AM
superb imagery Emile congrats on 4th place hugs
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Date: 3/5/2015 9:16:00 AM
Thanks so much Shadow, I appreciate your visit. Emile.
Date: 2/28/2015 8:40:00 AM
Wow! Stunning! Your images whip around and churn just like a storm tearing through the night.
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Date: 2/28/2015 10:02:00 AM
Thank you so much Monterey, your comments are always welcomed and appreciated. Emile.
Date: 2/28/2015 7:52:00 AM
Emile, you have painted a storm with wonderful words and lines, an excellent write and thanks for visiting my poem, I write poems . . .
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Date: 2/28/2015 8:32:00 AM
Thank you so much, your comments and support are greatly appreciated. Emile.
Date: 2/27/2015 4:48:00 PM
such vivid imagery Emile - i love the personification and the clever ending - i do love the calmness after a storm and the relief all is well with us:-) a 7 from me :-) good luck:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/27/2015 5:05:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I can always count on you for a smile. Emile.
Date: 2/27/2015 11:48:00 AM
I love the imagery.I like the line "And trees in the storm's fury, bow as the winds get extreme." #7
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Date: 2/27/2015 2:14:00 PM
Thanks Njeri, I appreciate your time and support. Emile.

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