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A Secret

Tucked in a box of memories is a smile lost long, long, ago. Tattered by the harshest of winds left buried beneath the winter's snow; is a smile lost long, long, ago. A tear that never ever fell, Left buried beneath the winter's snow. A secret pain, she could not tell. A tear that never, ever, fell; tattered by the harshest of winds, a secret pain she could not tell, tucked in a box of memories. Held delicately in tissue like a soft touch from God’s own hand; the snapshot of mother and child. An unplanned memory returned like a soft touch from God's own hand. Time sweeps every thought away. An unplanned memory returned, newborn on winter's coldest day. Time sweeps every thought away - the snapshot of mother and child, newborn on winter's coldest day held delicately in tissue.

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Date: 11/14/2014 12:59:00 PM
"newborn on winter's coldest day held delicately in tissue" what an imagery "Time sweeps every thought away. An unplanned memory returned" so subtle. Great piece. You are a gifted poet. A blessed one Rhonda. I feel a sort of comfort after the read. adding to my fav.....Love XXXXX rajat
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Date: 11/10/2014 1:39:00 AM
"tucked in a box of memories" "held delicately in tissue"! Stunning imagery, nice flow. Great piece.
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Date: 11/8/2014 8:37:00 AM
truly deep touching very beautifully painted piece rhonda golden pen
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Date: 11/8/2014 1:02:00 AM
inspiring.
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Date: 11/7/2014 10:34:00 AM
I think it is because you have not got a consistent syllable count; having said that - it is NOT a form requirement- I am only saying that a pleasant rhyme is easier to achieve with an even numbered syllable count. I am sending soup mail to show you. Light & Love
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