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A Sea of Tears

Long-suffering, at one time, A door mat, some would say. Too forgiving of a man until true suffering began... the unforgiving kind. Do not make promises to him you cannot keep. He hides himself on a mountaintop steep. One more lie, one more betrayal, one more slit in the cleave of his heart may push him from his rocky ledge, may be the death of him. He cries and cries until the earth floods, a deep, adulterated sea around his lonesome home, from where he perches, he can never roam or try to love again. A tragic tale he has made his own prison - walls of clouds dark and dim. Oh, can you save this man of tears who never learned to swim?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/27/2015 1:40:00 PM
You have an irrepressible talent that keeps shining through your words like a sparkling diamond adding to the depth of this piece. Emile. #7
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Date: 3/26/2015 4:44:00 AM
This for me a poem that I can interpret it in two ways.. :) i like the adulterated sea.. :) love the poetical devices you used here.. :)!//olive eloisa
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Date: 3/25/2015 7:43:00 AM
Very powerful! The ending is perfection!
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Date: 3/24/2015 2:55:00 AM
And they say that no man is an island. Sadly, sometimes they are. Marvellous write, Rhonda. Viv x
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Date: 3/24/2015 1:34:00 AM
I could identify with a lot of the lines in this impressive write Rhonda. I loved your ending too! 7
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Date: 3/23/2015 9:27:00 AM
Intense! A great write! Many layers to consider.
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Date: 3/23/2015 9:01:00 AM
Rhonda, your writing is intense in this hauntingly somewhat sad poem, a perfect 7 rating and thanks for visiting my poem, thinking in . . .
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Date: 3/23/2015 4:20:00 AM
Excellent. Well expressed poem. Enjoyed.. Tfs
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Date: 3/21/2015 11:35:00 PM
I agree with Laura, when I read this, I just feel there is more to it, like an onion with many layers, beautiful ( no pun intended with tears and onions LOL )
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Date: 3/21/2015 10:31:00 PM
There is always hope . . . the sadness of this story is felt deep within my heart! Nicely done. 7
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Date: 3/21/2015 7:47:00 AM
Wow, this is really really well expressed.
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Date: 3/20/2015 11:15:00 PM
I feel there is another fascinating story b hind this most interesting poem. Creatively written, as usual, Rhonda :)
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Don Williams
Date: 3/21/2015 2:38:00 AM
WOW that was very deep and beautiful. Now I see that you do feel where I have been. huggggssssssssss

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