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A river of consciousness-Win

Seated in this great vault of a cathedral Feeling as if people around me were meditating. There was stillness and peacefulness. The artist *Chinmoy began playing The unusual triple bamboo gourd flute. At first nothing much seemed to be happening Then my mind quieted and my heart opened a little. Began to feel something peaceful higher world His melodies simple, I knew nothing about virtuosity But somehow evoked a meditative inner quality. Ah, the silence is the nest and music is the bird All peace, all joy and all confidence inside the nest And from there the music-bird comes out And flies over this, my meditative world The seven higher worlds and seven lower worlds Each world has music of its own and a note of its own. My inner climbs up high, higher and highest And then enters into something beyond Helping me, molding me into transcendental image When I hear this soulful music An inner thrill from soles of my feet to crown of head A river flowing through me. a river of consciousness And this consciousness is all the time illumined.
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ 11/17/2011 Tenth Place win Contest: Any Poem Goes No.26 by Linda Mr. Chinmoy is the International Flute Player. Based on the event I attended in the year 2005 in LA.

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  1. Date: 5/7/2014 12:06:00 AM
    Dr. Ram, you take the reader on a great adventure. A delightful work and win!

  1. Date: 5/2/2014 9:19:00 PM
    A soulful trip ...congrats on your win Dr Ram

  1. Date: 5/2/2014 12:42:00 PM
    Dear. Dr. Ramji, Congratulations on the win. Truly transcendental in expression. Great write. Keep in touch

  1. Date: 5/1/2014 1:53:00 PM
    Is that the flute of meditation that I hear, where flowing music is the herald of peace? then let it play on! // congrats on win Dr. // paul

  1. Date: 5/1/2014 12:41:00 PM
    Thoughtful marvel Dr. Ram ! Loved this one! Congrats on win !

  1. Date: 5/1/2014 11:04:00 AM
    DR RAM... Congratulations! Enjoying every entry, ENTERED in my "Any Poem #26" contest. Always & Forever *LINDA"

  1. Date: 11/18/2011 11:28:00 AM
    Thank you for your kind comments Dr. Ram. Have a wonderful weekend. Live, Love, and Laugh. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/18/2011 12:05:00 AM
    A medative piece here Dr Ram, i feel the peace and flow you so well describe..!

  1. Date: 11/17/2011 10:53:00 PM
    thats really nice Dr. Mehta...I envy the feeling that emanate frm ur poem...a good one.. :)

  1. Date: 11/17/2011 9:36:00 PM
    wow, Dr. Ram. THis is very nice. I like how you incorporated elements of your culture and meditation. A great metaphor, that river!

  1. Date: 11/17/2011 8:37:00 PM
    Thank you, Dr. Mehta, I will look for that book you mentioned. :) Catie

  1. Date: 11/17/2011 8:10:00 PM
    My friend, your Sound of flute is so nice which awakes the Soul. Wonderfully worded in poem. Thanks for sharing and for giving me congratulation on my win. I too congrats you for your win in Rick Parise, Skat's contests along with all other recent win. Thanks, bl

  1. Date: 11/17/2011 7:20:00 PM
    Lovely write Dr. Ram, I partake in your peaceful state as I read your poem. Love,Vie

  1. Date: 11/17/2011 7:12:00 PM
    Wow! I wish I could have enjoyed that music with you. Have you ever read Yogananda? I am reading his book, "The Divine Romance" now, he spoke also of the seven heavens and seven lower worlds, but he only mentioned it in passing. hmmm... it makes me wonder. Hugs, Catie :)