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A Revelation

The door was open I wandered in amazed silence solitude alone with my thoughts He spoke then sat listening we dined He became a friend I became as a child Rev 3.20

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/11/2013 1:44:00 PM
I really really liked the message.
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Date: 1/11/2013 10:54:00 AM
This is excellent !! To become the child of the Master Teacher... love when HE visits me. Enjoyed !!
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Date: 1/11/2013 9:58:00 AM
Fantastic write, Brian! I love this! This one's going in my favs. Love, Kim
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Date: 1/11/2013 8:14:00 AM
Hi Brian long time since we connected. Always enjoy your poetry. Back in the city and hopefully back more at the soup. Kids moved down here so now I will not have to travel each week. love phyl
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