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A Revealing Truth

Toss then turn I put my ear to my pillow attentive to me like a sea serenade my conch to the ocean I hear my heart beat but never the same I think I know who is causing it to beat this way But not quite sure why it might be If I began to describe it following my most intense obsession mercilessly with phantoms of words I would arrive with shiver of surprise a revealing truth for you to hear You see, all the time I pretended to love you I didn't realize I was already in love with you all the while... ~ ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/4/2014 5:27:00 PM
She captured your heart without you being aware of it. She is a skillful hunter.
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Ken Carroll
Date: 4/4/2014 5:40:00 PM
Thanks Richard for the visit!
Date: 4/3/2014 10:30:00 AM
dear me.. a mellow song with such sweet pining.. i sigh, paul... huggs!
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Ken Carroll
Date: 4/3/2014 11:10:00 AM
Hi Nette, Thanks for the compliment!
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 4/3/2014 10:31:00 AM
KEN!!
Date: 4/2/2014 11:06:00 AM
:) Awwwwwwwww.......sweet! Didn't expect that ending....
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Ken Carroll
Date: 4/2/2014 12:08:00 PM
Thank you Eileen..Hope you're having a lovely day!

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