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A Reply(Part 1)

The Passage: "..beauty's but a painted fly if to keep a man you wish charm's the hidden mystery that will hook your fish.." To The Damsel: a man is normal if he delights on you- beauty is but a beer made better through brew. you should also know, however, it also common all things must end, thus an expiration. ''love'' should end as beauty should end if you hooked him only with youthful amusement; as it fade away you can do nothing but wave bye- for men feast on beauty with their eye. To The Captive: soon reality will prick you showing colors and taints that is true; thy love will be a cliff on a fog- only you would know when you were dragged.

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