A Rainbow

a rainbow arcs across the sky - - a dove soars for Carol’s haiku contest

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Date: 7/12/2012 3:24:00 PM

Very nice... Terry

Date: 5/16/2012 11:04:00 AM

nicely done - great in simplicity :)

Date: 5/13/2012 9:56:00 AM

Rereading this one. It's truly one of the best.

Date: 5/13/2012 4:48:00 AM

wonderful Jack, a awesome entry. harry

Date: 5/12/2012 12:07:00 PM

This is a truly charismatic write my friend! This is a delightful poem, I love it, it's perfect! You are a master of the short verse! Great Work!!

Date: 5/11/2012 11:32:00 PM

Tasty!!!So beautiful!!!

Date: 5/11/2012 8:47:00 PM

wow Jack, this is VERY haiku of you!!!

Date: 5/11/2012 6:46:00 PM

Great one..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and taking time to comment..Sara

Date: 5/11/2012 5:20:00 PM

how beautiful!!! love it Always, Laura

Date: 5/11/2012 4:42:00 PM

Wish you luck in contest with this lovely haiku poem Jack. - oxox Anne-Lise

Date: 5/11/2012 2:57:00 PM

This is a great Haikiu poem, I enjoyed reading it today.