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A Positive Poem

Eyes as bright as emeralds Love light glowing warm within Caused by a bulging wallet Money warms the heart Spending gives so much pleasure Unlocking the need to love Money keeping fire lit 'Till cold shower hits Contest name A Positive Poem Penned 16/06/2014

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 7/3/2014 6:42:00 AM

I really apprecite the sight I've been given by the Divine to see wonderful, diverse works as yours Seren! Congrats for your win!!!! :-)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/30/2014 4:23:00 PM

I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find it of exceptional quality. Sara

Seren Roberts
Date: 6/30/2014 4:56:00 PM

Thank u Sara ....Seren

Mohan Chutani

Date: 6/28/2014 5:18:00 AM

Congrats Seren for the win. Mohan

Seren Roberts
Date: 6/28/2014 1:00:00 PM

Thank you Mohan .....Seren

Jadazzle United

Date: 6/16/2014 5:17:00 PM

I prefer the simple things in life that money simply cannot buy :-) Hugs Jan xxx Good luck in the contest. xx

Seren Roberts
Date: 6/16/2014 9:55:00 PM

Me too, if you can buy it, then it's not what I want...Seren

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/16/2014 4:53:00 PM

Dear Seren, After the cold shower, money's pleasure sometimes seems worthless. (Some of us want other qualities more than money, right?) Your witty write will do well in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Seren Roberts
Date: 6/16/2014 9:57:00 PM

Thx Carolyn was a fun write, am not mercenary like that, thank goodness ....Seren

Tim Smith

Date: 6/16/2014 10:34:00 AM

lol...we don't like cold showers Seren...would rather have a warm heart...hugs Tim

Seren Roberts
Date: 6/16/2014 9:56:00 PM

True Tim ....Seren