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A Place Above the Crowd

Killed in Action.... Now his absence will be grieved This is how they will perceive him ~ He was the boy, we didn't really notice He always had a smile A little shy, smaller than the rest Although he tried, he was never the best But he always had a smile Never the best at hitting the ball or winning a race, or having a face that the rest of the gang would notice at all But he always had a smile He was the guy, that people forgot It's not that they meant to do any harm It is just that they thought he lacked the charm Rejected by some, neglected by most Too quiet they said....to stand above the crowd Even though he always had a smile Yet...now that heads are bowed....they notice him Only the war had use for him...long enough to lose him Killed in action.... Funny about that.....now that he is gone....they are even writing songs of him But he was a hero....long before they noticed ................................................................... For David's Contest: Heros or Heroines 6/7/12

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Date: 6/14/2012 12:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in David's "Hero's & Heroine's" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/13/2012 6:31:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie xx
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Date: 6/13/2012 2:05:00 AM
Carrie, a sad tale of many peoples son's who were already hero's before they left...David
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Date: 6/12/2012 9:21:00 PM
Carrie, this one is really special. One of the best I think because it deals with a sad topic and makes people stop and think. I sure am glad for these winners' lists so that I can see your poems since I rarely have time any more just to peruse the regular poem lists. congrats.
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Date: 6/12/2012 8:57:00 PM
painfully beautiful, carrie.. special cheers to you for this super win:) huggs!
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Date: 6/12/2012 8:16:00 PM
Well now isn't that just the truth and how it goes? So many are heroes before anyone notices itI am impressed by the way you brought this out in this poem. I see by the comments youve won with this one and its no wonder.Well done Carrie and thank you for the comment.
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Date: 6/12/2012 7:29:00 PM
Touching, thoughtfull and thought provoking as always! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/9/2012 5:34:00 AM
Funny thing dear poet, the way souls are. I've personally encountered this type of behavior by some souls in regard another, and it brings sadness to the heart to witness such ! Fantastic write Carrie ! Have a wonderful weekend my friend....much love, james
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Date: 6/8/2012 8:18:00 AM
A beautiful day full of sunshine and good cheer. I am so happy to be able to read your poetry this morning Carrie. I wish you a weekend of sunshine and joy and hope you continue to find the inspiration to continue your writing. Will be back reading come Monday I hope. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/7/2012 7:20:00 PM
Wow, this is an amazing write Carrie! I really enjoyed this courageous poem! This write brought a tear form my eye! I haven't read such a good poem in a long time! Thank you for writing this elite write! Wonderful, simply wonderful poem! Great Work!!
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