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Dear Treasure Chest

“The heart hath its own memory, like the mind, and in It are enshrined the precious keepsakes, into which is Wrought the giver’s loving thought.” Henry Wadsworth Longfellow Dear Treasure Chest Invaluable is tender love’s domain, that ruby red that lies beneath the breast. But just as precious is the treasure chest which houses our intelligence - the brain. With memories exquisite to retain, this coffer is the one that serves us best. And likely we’ll not know how well we’re blessed till luster of our keepsakes starts to wane. The ruby oft is lost; we pay a toll. Yet time and time again, that gem we find. Not so within the storehouse of our soul when strands of fond remembrances unwind. Dear treasure chest of which we’ve no control, what good the heart when pearls fade from the mind? For the contest of Sara Kendrick

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Date: 4/8/2015 2:39:00 AM
G'day Andrea... really nice flowing poetry. Thank you Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 4/4/2015 9:53:00 AM
I really like the ending and the line "ruby red that lies beneath the breast". To me it gives the heart much more of a surreal feeling.
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Date: 3/25/2015 10:50:00 PM
A 7 ! ! Congratulations on your win. Blessings dear friend Eve
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Date: 3/25/2015 7:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 3/25/2015 6:18:00 PM
W O W .....that's it.....W O W...
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Date: 3/25/2015 1:13:00 PM
Andrea, Iwanted to thank you personally for entering my contest...An interesting way to go with the theme..Thanks for all the visits to my work..Sara
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Date: 3/25/2015 3:01:00 AM
Back to give my praise and Congrats on your win. I am so glad this poem made the winner's list. It is wonderful Andrea!
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Date: 3/24/2015 6:46:00 PM
Big congrats on the win my friend. As usual you ink words that turn into a gem. All great but this really got me.. "The ruby oft is lost; we pay a toll. Yet time and time again, that gem we find. Not so within the storehouse of our soul when strands of fond remembrances unwind." A7 As I've lost a few rubies in my day and paid the toll.. Yet even those sad memories are most precious to me!
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Date: 3/24/2015 3:31:00 PM
Hi Andrea, I am stopping back to say congratulations on your nice win for this insightful poem. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/24/2015 2:43:00 PM
a wonderful quote and a beautifully penned sonnet - congrats Andrea:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/24/2015 9:03:00 AM
I love this one...Congrats on a great win Andrea
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Date: 3/24/2015 8:53:00 AM
Beautifully done Andrea! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 3/21/2015 7:34:00 PM
We all have to go somehow I guess? Perhaps it is a kindness to forget? [as long as I don't loose the way home! - thank the lord for GPS!] Light & Love
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Date: 3/21/2015 8:30:00 AM
Sadness wrapped within exquisite beauty as only you can do, Andrea.
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Date: 3/20/2015 7:43:00 AM
Wouldn't be a trip to the Soup without reading my friend..xoox Michael
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Date: 3/19/2015 10:47:00 AM
Yes - the last two lines of the first stanza. Love, daver
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Date: 3/19/2015 7:07:00 AM
Thought provoking and tender poem.
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Date: 3/19/2015 7:03:00 AM
Andrea, this sonnet is just so beautiful, you have such a way with words that touch me deeply, well done and thanks so much for visiting, I write . . . .
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Date: 3/19/2015 12:06:00 AM
I love the quote of Longfellow Andrea, and your write is exceptional ! Awesome dear poet ! And, by-the-way....you owe me a penny if you read my next write ! ;) Have a wonderful week my friend.....much love, james
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Date: 3/18/2015 9:29:00 PM
This is oh so beautiful and a winner, Andrea...to my faves. Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 3/18/2015 9:11:00 PM
Wow, I'm not sure I've ever enjoyed reading one of your poems more Andrea. It truly speaks to the passing presence of the past. Peace. :) Worth at least a dime. :)
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Date: 3/18/2015 7:19:00 PM
Very deep and much to think about in your words, Andrea. Through the years we all pray that our "treasure chest" of heart and mind be kept in tact and in sync. Such a lovely Sonnet. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/18/2015 7:15:00 PM
How beautifully inspirational this poem is Andrea. You fit right in with the masters! I loved this! 7
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Date: 3/18/2015 5:17:00 PM
Beautiful write Andrea...great ending line..."Taking Aim is not in the contest.....hugs
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Date: 3/18/2015 3:45:00 PM
You are so prolific! I hope you win the contest. I think I might try to write a pantoum again. Free verse is great but there is something to be said for rhyme and form as well. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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