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a passed note

a passed note
do you like me or not
my paper heart


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  1. Date: 6/14/2012 12:31:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Simple Poems" contest Susan. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/13/2012 7:43:00 AM
    Susan congrats on your win..David

  1. Date: 6/13/2012 7:21:00 AM
    congrats on your win Susan...

  1. Date: 6/13/2012 12:59:00 AM
    Surprising third line, Susan! : ) Congrats on your win with this romantic senryu! Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 11:26:00 AM
    Congratulations on your great win!!! Terry

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 9:21:00 AM
    HA,,, HOW DID i miss this one,, Hi Susan.. A wonderful congratulations with your awesome deep poem,... God bless~ XOX*PD

  1. Date: 6/9/2012 8:11:00 PM
    Susan , this is an excellent senryu! Where are you lately? Haven't heard from you lately.

  1. Date: 6/7/2012 7:52:00 AM
    Lovely you a lot B.E.S. - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/6/2012 12:52:00 PM
    Susan - Such a treat in three little lines.

  1. Date: 6/4/2012 1:04:00 PM
    short yet strong,love it,Ivy

  1. Date: 6/4/2012 8:12:00 AM
    lol, I love this straight to the point approach, Susan

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 5:31:00 AM
    Love it!!! The sweet memories you brought back..all smiles.

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 10:29:00 PM
    i would like it if you'd pay attention to me. :-) lol! right back at you Susan...... Keep your short form style, I like it or why else would i come back here. now go host a limerick contest, join me & PD. She's really convincing. I' can't accept the paper heart, without ripping it' Senryu is cute' and my avatar is cute' I'll change it soon'

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 7:33:00 PM
    This is a wonderful, extraordinary write my friend! You have written a lovely speak exactly the way we were in grammar school! Thanks for bringing up pleasant memories! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 6:58:00 PM
    I like you lol lol especially for your great mind xoxoxo