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A Parallel Universe

Imagine if there was a parallel universe Somewhere out there in space Other humans exactly like us Living in the same time and place This might spook a whole lot of people Not me, I think it'd be great To meet my alter ego in person To ask questions of my parallel mate Find out if he's sad when I'm down Or happy, when I'm over the moon Ask him what he thinks of the world's conflicts Does he nap in the afternoon There's a million questions I'd have for him Like what's all this madness about? Does he have a cure for the ills of the world? Is our time on this planet running out? There must be other forms of life out there They'd probably look strange to us humans Maybe they're still at a primitive stage But we're all still part of the plan © Jack Ellison 2013

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Date: 12/17/2022 9:29:00 PM
The Parallel universe concept is intriguing. There’s got to be more out there than we can comprehend. Always, Laura
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Date: 12/20/2022 10:07:00 AM
Not a question dear Laura... we would be very arrogant to assume we are the only living beings that exist... not comprehensible! XOX
Date: 1/18/2013 7:14:00 AM
love the way it reads, so cute. And I believe there is life out there. have a blessed day Jack ;}
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Date: 1/18/2013 7:16:00 AM
With the countless billions of stars out there, we would be silly to think we are alone! Thank you dear Debbie... hugs!
Date: 1/14/2013 12:49:00 PM
I believe there are other created beings out there, Jack! That's a whole other story! ;) Love the way you took me out of my little box and out into the universe with this lovely poem!
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Date: 1/14/2013 4:14:00 PM
My thoughts... of intelligent beings out there, yes! A parallel universe, no! Thanks for your kind comments dear Eileen! Love and big hugs, Jack
Date: 1/14/2013 9:01:00 AM
amazing write my friend jack.. thank you for sharing you brilliant thought... luv it <3 <3 <3
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Date: 1/14/2013 4:09:00 PM
You are so very kind my dear Sukmawati! Thank you! Hugs, Jack
Date: 1/14/2013 8:59:00 AM
Did you notice that your poem looks like a clay pot? Perhaps if it cracks the universe will split in two and the mystery will be revealed.
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Date: 1/14/2013 4:08:00 PM
That would be a news worthy event, wouldn't it! My money says, life on other planets... yes... parallel universe... no!
Date: 1/14/2013 8:01:00 AM
On Netflicks I was watching sliders yesterday... About meeting ourselves in parallel universes.... Can you read minds? ROFL (Roll on floor Laughing) My Hubby said to use it... but LOL is all I can remember... I wonder how my double writes?
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Date: 1/14/2013 8:04:00 AM
There CAN'T be two of us, CAN THERE??? ROTFLMAO! Hugs!
Date: 1/14/2013 7:30:00 AM
Lol, I don't know what to think about it. Part of me believes in other beings out there. But the other godly part doesn't, ha. I think it would be awesome if there are indeed other beings out at some other universe. Who knows, right? Great write, Jack. Have an awesome day!
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Date: 1/14/2013 7:36:00 AM
I can't imagine, with the billions of stars out there, that we are the only one with intelligent life! You're right, who knows for sure! Have a great day, my dear friend... hugs, Jack

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