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A One Year Olds Shoes

I lined them up there on the floor One pair, two pair, three pair, more Black and brown, white and pink You can’t have too many shoes I think Tennis shoes for running round Dress shoes for a trip downtown Sandals to show off my toes And that is just a few of those Some are flats, some little heels I love the way a new shoe feels I look at my shoes and think “dog gone” I wonder which foot each goes on Until I figure where each is put I just might have to stay barefoot Mdailey 1/19/12 3rd place in contest

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Date: 2/7/2012 7:36:00 AM
Congratulations to you on your win in Brian Strand 's "Whatever Again" contest Mike. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/6/2012 8:04:00 PM
Such fun MIke, feet deserve some recogition and you did it with great style! Re: my publisher authorhouse. I got a special for $800. which gives me a second publishing free (If). Check the packages, I got the "Laureate". Specials come regularly so if you decide, make sure you get in on one. If you want to know more, soup mail me.
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Date: 2/6/2012 3:46:00 PM
bloody hell me foots a smell, what am i gonna do... wear no shoes :( great poem mate
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Date: 2/6/2012 2:43:00 PM
Congrats, Mike. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 2/5/2012 10:06:00 PM
congrats mike on a special third place win for these sensational lines of poetic art luv..
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Date: 2/5/2012 9:58:00 PM
Very good for a chuckle. Enjoyed the humor Mike. Congratulations
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Date: 2/5/2012 9:03:00 PM
Very cute! Congrats on your win. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 2/5/2012 12:33:00 PM
Love this witty piece, Mike. Hope you are much better now
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Date: 2/4/2012 5:16:00 PM
Sweet little rhyming poem you have here. This was fun to read.
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Date: 2/4/2012 1:40:00 PM
greeat , feel-fine piece, mike.. i danced barefoot today, wow!..:) hugggs!
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Date: 2/4/2012 12:59:00 PM
I like barefoot.....a happy shoes poem. :) -oxox love Anne-Lise
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