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A night to remember...

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A night to remember...

I stepped myself into the room
And saw him grinning in the gloom

He came to me and held my hand
And slide a diamond ring in grand

He hugged and kissed me all over
And I then surrendered as a blown flower

He started oozing the aroma of love
And the fragrance intoxicated me in shove

He un-wrapped his gift in delight
And started enjoying inch by inch in polite

His depth of love one couldn’t measure
And I moaned in an unbearable pleasure

He took me to the edge of cloud seven
And made me hear the drums of heaven…

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  1. Date: 4/1/2012 2:09:00 AM
    "And started enjoying inch by inch in polite.." .. Learning to take -> "politeness" Effectively communicates the female desire of expected behaviour from the partner to be a good boy and thankfully accept the marvellous gift with passion and gratitude :) and be careful not to waste any inch ;) Needless to say... I loved it Guruji ;)

  1. Date: 8/17/2011 1:15:00 AM
    Hello Saurabh, Thank you soo much :) with love, Pravs

  1. Date: 8/17/2011 12:47:00 AM
    your thoughts on love are great thanks for depicting and sharing those great poems.....