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A Night Splendid

Violet blue filled the color of the blind night Beneath the sprinkle of flashy star dust, I felt the breeze Gazing upon the skies with no limitation Underneath my mind cavity, I amazed Moonlit hid beyond its shadow As if reluctantly shared the gleam next to my car's window Though, the beauty of this bliss conquer my anxiety Bring me back to the shelter of my sanity My mouth shut but my imagination crawling The silhouette of my days as though reflected in constellations And the cotton clouds pretend to be the angel's wings Night flapping its miracle in magic Seek for some splendor through the night whisper Still I stunned staring at the skies in fully manner Statued at the parking lot, people might think that I'm crazy One voice call out my name and bring me back to my reality

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/10/2013 11:47:00 PM
Now I can wish you good morning as I lay down my head to sleep. I pass the Sun over to your care and I will Guard the moon until it is time to return it to you. Have a wonderful day. Hugs Rick
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/11/2013 12:20:00 AM
Thank you Rick it is really nice to have a greet by you by day and night :D, I really appreciate them so much :)
Date: 1/10/2013 7:41:00 AM
Good night Yanny, your night ends, my day begins. I hope it was a great one.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/10/2013 8:28:00 AM
Good day Rick :D wishing you a great and beautiful day :) - hug, yanny
Date: 1/9/2013 8:38:00 PM
Yanny, some imagination... he he he... sometimes at night i purposely allow my mind to play along with all my surroundings.. yes reality is god...pd
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/10/2013 8:24:00 AM
Your imagination must be wonderful Linda, it depicted through your beauty verses :D
Date: 1/9/2013 4:02:00 PM
You have a great poem here. I hope that you are back in the real world. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla Part III is posted.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/10/2013 8:22:00 AM
Tahnks Luci, and your piece also beautiful and wonderful penned Luci :)- big hug, yanny
Date: 1/9/2013 3:00:00 PM
beautiful poem Yanny
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/9/2013 3:58:00 PM
Thanks Harry, wishing you a great day :D - hug, yanny
Date: 1/9/2013 8:42:00 AM
A truly lovely poem Yanny, I become more and more fond of your poems. - Always nice to read what you write, my dear friend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/9/2013 3:56:00 PM
Thank you Anne yours are also gorgeous to be read :)
Date: 1/9/2013 8:19:00 AM
So love a night sky and the beauty it holds !! Time has no meaning when you get caught up in the cloak of the night.... Enjoyed !!
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/9/2013 8:23:00 AM
Thanks Debra, really a pleasant visit by you :D - hug, yanny
Date: 1/9/2013 6:50:00 AM
I love the way you describe things and how you use your words, like you it is very unique. Another great poem Yanny.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/9/2013 7:14:00 AM
Thank you Richard, i wish you to get well soon :D

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