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A Night of Wishful Reverie

My mind is drifting like clouds carried by the wind My thoughts are floating like one who had too much gin No, I am not drunk; do not misunderstand me I’m just loosening my grip on wishful reverie Two years have gone by, but my heart still longs for you Two years have gone by, do you still feel that way too? I have prayed to God to take away those feelings Feelings I have tried to evict from my thinking Resisting those thoughts is not a good solution The more I resist, the stronger my affection I will not hold back; let me dream of what could be Let me dream of us; of you drawing close to me

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Date: 5/9/2016 10:17:00 AM
Wonderful reveries on life, love and hope. Impressed.
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Joanne Liaw
Date: 5/11/2016 11:25:00 PM
Thank you for the encouraging feedback :)
Date: 4/25/2016 6:57:00 AM
"The more I resist, the stronger my affection" - this is so true:) A heartfelt write:)
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Joanne Liaw
Date: 4/25/2016 10:04:00 PM
Thank you for the encouraging feedback :)

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