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A Night of Passion - a Collaboration With Mystic Rose

Angel’s sing a chorus from cloisters that echo lustful cries of love While lovers drink in glances, passion turns to intimate desires With trembling limbs they move, eager to entwine Showing signs of hunger, in eagerness they thirst Like a fine wine, they gingerly sip the taste of their sins Soon to be committed The Parish priest would be shocked at the debauchery Yet why do the angels sing in unison? The passion of love and life is the angel’s glory A choir sings from above, at the happiness below The coupling of spirits and raw desire Gods design a miracle To be celebrated Note: This is a collaboration with Mystic Rose, and what a pleasure it was!!!!

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Brooke Dylan

Date: 4/28/2014 7:06:00 PM

Bravo... Bravo.. I love your poetry,.. it made me smile... makes me want to sing... wonderful poetry.. Brooke

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/23/2014 11:35:00 PM

You are so kind, I look forward to it, what song will sing?

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 4/28/2014 10:24:00 AM

It was a pleasure to read such a fine piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

Casarah Nance

Date: 4/27/2014 10:48:00 PM

I am impressed beyond words! :) you two did such an amazing piece of art. I love it!!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/23/2014 11:36:00 PM

Thanks Casarah, first a piece of art, then a piece of arthur LOL

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/27/2014 2:45:00 PM

you always surprise me with your content approach, vie.. very creatively,, passionately done... super collab.. huggs

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/23/2014 11:38:00 PM

Thanks Nette, sorry for long delay in responding!!!! Cheers!

Paul Callus

Date: 4/27/2014 2:33:00 PM

Awesome collaboration indeed! What a lovely, sensual write! Yes, it must have been a pleasure to write....flows right through...gives you away:) a 7 rating to both 'lovers'. // paul

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/23/2014 11:39:00 PM

Wow that's a 14 !!! LOL cheers! and thanks!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 4/27/2014 12:17:00 PM

One word: luscious.... :) nice nice claps for you and hugs to my soul sister Vien :) , lol olive eloisa :)

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/23/2014 11:40:00 PM

oh la la luscious you say? :)

Jan Allison

Date: 4/27/2014 7:59:00 AM

Beautiful sensual write - oh how i do love the harmony of two minds on these collaborations! Hugs jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 5/24/2014 1:48:00 AM

Behave Arthur!!!! I always used to run myself down - since joining here i have such confidence and am flying high. Hugs Jan xxxx

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/23/2014 11:41:00 PM

Well to be honest 1.5 minds, me being the .5 :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/27/2014 12:53:00 AM

I enjoyed, I felt a bit like a voyeur because I made no attempt to look away. A very sensual piece you have both created together. Perhaps in nine months you will birth twin sequels.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/27/2014 12:57:00 AM

And here I thought I was the funny one!!!!! LOL Thanks Richard!

A.E. Rivenbark

Date: 4/26/2014 10:37:00 PM

This is such a sensual poem! Great write you guys!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/23/2014 11:34:00 PM

Thanks!!!!! Was fun to write!