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A New Road Home

I've passed it by, so many times before While traveling this twisted asphalt highway That weathered sign, nailed, so crudely fashioned To peeling bark, upon the yoke Of one ancient, gnarled and battered cottonwood tree It marks a fork of the old backwood road Where gravel branches, bends and sways And meanders through the glade Where the dry creek bed, goes high into the hills... Where poison oak thrives, and secrets hide... There it is!.... That feeling, that inclination to explore... I've had before.... Stabbing that place of my wanderlust My curiosity.... An old dented mailbox....sitting alone...whose, do you suppose? Where does the mail go? Does anyone know? So many times,.....we have passed on by... I've caught a glimpse, and thoughts would rise... What lies beyond this fork in the road? What lies beyond the bend, the turn?...What would we learn? What course, would we follow If just this once, we turned, and broke away from the ordinary... Changed our direction...followed the unknown Where the creek runs dry And the banks are rife... With chokecherry....and willow scrub Where leaves are layered with chalk white dust?... Will we ever know? What lies beyond the fork in the road?.... As I turn my head, and watch my chance disappear once again.... Will I ever know?..... _________________________________________________________________

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Date: 8/21/2010 8:07:00 PM
Very nice! I really love how you decided to write this poem. It looks like a winding road. Congratulations on your first place finish!
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Date: 8/21/2010 6:02:00 PM
Congrats on the first win, Carrie
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Date: 8/20/2010 10:28:00 PM
An amazing poem. Loved the line, Where the creeks run dry. Many congrats for this win.
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Date: 8/20/2010 5:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Carrie in Constance ~A Rambling Poet's~ contest "A Road Less Travelled~~". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/20/2010 2:41:00 AM
oh! I absolutely loved this! And of how you pose that question-- super congrats on your win! Everything was just so vividly told and I could just wish myself & picture myself being compelled to check out that road??? What indeed lies behind that road?? I liked how you took a different turn here, not exactly going on that road but pondering about it....very thought provoking!! hugs nikko :)
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Date: 8/19/2010 7:41:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie, This was a great write. I followed as you were driving and would like to know as well. Jerri
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Date: 8/19/2010 7:39:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your well deserved first place win in Constance's contest.. an awesome write and a beautiful entry.. enjoy.. with luv from Italy..ciao..
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Date: 8/19/2010 7:14:00 PM
Congratulations on another big win, Carrie! First place for first-class poetry. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/19/2010 6:09:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie, on first place in my contest, the Road Less Travelled~~ this poem was everything I imagined when I developed the contest, it is just beautiful and gosh so visually pretty~~ could you please send me your address by soupmail, so I can forward your Certificate of Achievement in poetry~~
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Date: 8/17/2010 7:21:00 PM
Only if you give in to curiosity, like this write. You have me wondering what lies down the road.
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Date: 8/17/2010 6:19:00 PM
being much more comfortable with what we already know is the state of mind you have described so well in this descriptive thought provoking narrative, Carrie. Masterfully done.
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Date: 8/17/2010 4:07:00 PM
Great write that should do well in the contest..Reads like winners' circle..Keep the creative pen flowing..Good luck in the contest..Sara
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Date: 8/17/2010 4:06:00 PM
Smile ~ What another touching, classical and beautiful poem Dear Precious Carrie Richards ~ I think I shall have to fave this wonderful verse which holds such profound questions and reflections....Smile, "Soo Beautiful;" beyond any words really ~ The roads amid the journies of life; blessed if we our fortunate by so many beautiful lives, loves and memories ~ "Beautiful" ~ "My Love Always & Forever to You & Yours," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Beautiful Evening Dear;" Bye!:) ~
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Date: 8/17/2010 3:06:00 PM
Great poem, Carrie. I don't think we ever know what lies beyond "the fork in the road" unless we choose to explore it. Very intriguing write! Best wishes in Constance's Contest. Love, Carolyn
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