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A New Dawn Somewhere

the quick setting sun silhouettes of flying birds.... a new dawn somewhere ================== Placement: 9th; (June 2011) Contest:Haiku Crazy~ Sponsor:Poet Destroyer By:kashinath karmakar(2nd January 2011)

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Jerry Bolton

Date: 1/26/2014 8:37:00 AM

Perfect haiku. Very visual.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 1/25/2014 4:42:00 AM

superb traditional haiku Kash well penned congrats on featuring Shadow x smile hug

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/29/2013 4:57:00 PM

Kash, have you ever heard the line "It's five o'clock somewhere" That's what came to me this time as i looked at the titles in one of your last pages!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/31/2011 12:53:00 AM

Remembering this one One of your best haiku ever. Well, Kash, wasn't it interesting the comments you and I got on our lying poems? I sure hope you didn't mind I did that. The moment i read yours, I thought it was SO clever and the idea to respond to it just grew and grew in my mind. Thanks for inspiring me so I could enter the contest. In her rules she said to make it serious to trick her. WIth our tone, we were not serious. I hope we still might win! Goodnight. I was up way too late here. andie

Joe Maverick

Date: 6/10/2011 3:22:00 PM

good result in the placement win Kashinath, best wishes.!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/9/2011 9:27:00 AM

Accept my congratulations on this win in the contest of p.d., kashinath

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/9/2011 7:27:00 AM

Congratulations on a well deserved win in Poet Destroyer's "Haiku~Crazy" contest Kashinath. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/9/2011 1:59:00 AM

winning cheeers, kashi..:) huggs

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/8/2011 11:25:00 PM

could very well be! enjoyed your view on this, Kashinath :) congrats on your win :D

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/8/2011 10:28:00 PM

Kash! Congratulations!!!! Thank you for the awesome haiku's and supporting my contest. Don't miss out on my next one.. Take care,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/8/2011 8:53:00 PM

Congrats Kashinath on your super duper win in the Haiku contest my friend.. u wowed them..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/8/2011 8:42:00 PM

Congratulations on the winners' list, Kash. SUre hope you are ok. I haven't heard from you in a little while! Luv, Andrea

Eiken Laan

Date: 2/8/2011 7:36:00 AM

Beautiful haiku:)))

James Fraser

Date: 1/11/2011 9:51:00 AM

Wonderful images abound in the creative Haiku....:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/7/2011 10:48:00 PM

JUst came here again to say how nice this one is!!

Eiken Laan

Date: 1/5/2011 2:08:00 PM

Kashinath, This is really magical, I love the images and the idea that we all live in different time zones so when your sun sets it rises somewhere else. This is a very clever haiku, wonderful:))))

David Smalling

Date: 1/5/2011 12:42:00 PM

Awesome, love this ... please do it again. One love

Eamon Duffin

Date: 1/3/2011 7:20:00 AM

Hi Kashinath. Thank you for your visit. Great imagery and thought in this lovely piece. Love the idea that when my sun sets, it rises for someone else. Like the members on this site, we all have different times to be on, yet we are all one. The very best of luck in the contest. Eamon

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 1/3/2011 4:37:00 AM

You caught a wonderful moment there. A memorable haiku. Déirdre Ó Maidín

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/3/2011 4:17:00 AM

What a way to start out my New Year reading such exceptional poetry. Thank you for starting the new year out with us sharing your wonderful poetry Kashinath. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/2/2011 10:23:00 PM

Love it. ONe of my favorites in this contest. Luv, andrea

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/2/2011 5:49:00 PM

While the sun sets here, it is rising somewhere else in the world. This is a good descriptive haiku that will make Charles Henderson's choosing more difficult.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/2/2011 5:47:00 PM

Nice picture you have drawn of the universe, kashinath.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/2/2011 6:06:00 AM

a remarkable sense of the "beauty" of a moment,kashinath. great wording.... best winning wishes in the contest! namaste..) nette

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/2/2011 5:48:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku my poet friend...so enjoyed your images on my Sunday morning...