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A Neighborhood Child

One Christmas eve my ceiling hung With thready webs a glow behind Cast lace patterns on my bed That Yule eight reindeer ran the covers Then through every midnight room I cried to mother father brother All of whom had shed by dream Their task of season’s rush and bother Free but lost to my entreat “Can’t you see them paw prance? Oh mother how they rear and point At Santa – that jolly Christmas ghost” All filmy things once designated Then not real evaporated And I sat straight up in bed Rubbed the cobwebs from my eyes Memory of tinsel candy Presents in my drowsy head Awake to silence angel hair Little men in forest dress Imaginary pixies on the stair And then remembering the tree (all hazy else it seems had been a dream) The tree that by our fireplace rose In thought it glowed above the dreamy web Those blue green red silver lights Had formed quaint phantoms on my bed I’m up on tiptoe and carefully Am sneaking toward the living room (Inky blackness don’t you see) Don’t you see the little man Dressed in Santa suit belt and boots Spreading presents neath the tree Now truth be known so sorry am I to say ‘Little boy blue’ is yet in bed Those phantom figures swimming his head And late that eve ceiling bright With visions of the coming day The wisest Angel of the night Makes visit singing of the play A song of filial brotherhood With child invests the neighborhood

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/25/2009 11:45:00 AM
Oh, I just read your comment to my other poem. YEs, our poems are somewhat similar, about little kids on Christmas Eve!
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Date: 12/25/2009 11:43:00 AM
This had a dreamy nostalgic quality to it, DAve. Nice little read! Thanks for commenting on my poems, I have lots of humorous ones in store for you (just dont' dare to post all my stuff at once). Hope to see your funny stuff too in the future! andrea
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Date: 12/18/2009 12:30:00 AM
Especially like the first triplet,an inner poem Daver.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words.
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Date: 12/15/2009 3:54:00 AM
It would appear to me you were visted by Mr. Poe - HO! hO! HO! lol! You never cease to amaze and delight, dear Daver. Love,Lainie
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Date: 12/12/2009 7:18:00 AM
Wonderful, daver. Your poetry continues to delight. Merry Christmas
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Date: 12/9/2009 6:23:00 PM
Me thinks you were a captivating child with a huge imagination....me thinks that the little boy blue is you...and you still have that wonderful captivating imagination... Please never lose it...and please never "grow up"! Loved this poem! :) Luv, Carrie
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Date: 12/9/2009 5:11:00 PM
I like your comments..they SAY something..something other than "congrad's" you're a meaningful man! Light & Love
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Date: 12/9/2009 3:09:00 PM
Very nice memories shared in the fun and well written poem. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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Date: 12/9/2009 3:08:00 PM
what a neat poem Dave-r..it gets better as you read it again. Mery Chrstman you...Bg
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Date: 12/9/2009 2:36:00 PM
ahh yes --christmas dreams, merry christmas lil boy blue. -Robert
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