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A Naughty Little Girl

I sleep. The hours tick by mercilessly; unfilled, purposeless, full of potential "What to do? What to do???" I mutter, tumbling, like Alice, down the rabbit hole. My hands push down ballooning petticoats, careful not to show or touch anything. I twirl beneath the pile down comforters. The hours tick by crimson red and in the dream, the rose Queen shouts, "Off with HER HEAD!" An eyebrow is plucked whole from my face. It falls matted and to the ground leaving me, brow akimbo, surprised, and horrified. "What to do? What to do? What to do???" Half shorn. Half drawn. Half born? A painter's pallet appears before me. A brow is drawn… for me. Yet, the Rose Queen still screams on. "Off with HER HEAD! Off with HER HEAD!"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/27/2012 1:12:00 AM
debbie, CONGRATULATIONS with your wonderful win * hugs ;-)~p.d
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Date: 1/25/2012 5:59:00 PM
that's not a fun dream at all!! Congratulations, Deb. I really liked your description in this one.
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Date: 1/24/2012 6:32:00 PM
Cool Debbie! This one is way out there and I like it-congrats!
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/24/2012 6:47:00 PM
real dream hon..scary..I guess about not being who and or what my parents wanted me to be..a recurring dream of youth
Date: 1/24/2012 4:35:00 PM
Congratulations
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Date: 1/24/2012 1:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Olajide's "Dream Land" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/18/2012 1:59:00 PM
poppin rose buds is cruel..... didn't understand, I just made a rose rhyme though... coincidently.
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Date: 1/18/2012 2:17:00 PM
‡ You Naughty Girl ‡
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Date: 1/18/2012 2:15:00 PM
‡ Owwww ¥ Spread Your Sweeet Heart ¥ To Taste Your Luv ¥ Always, Rachael ‡
Date: 1/17/2012 6:52:00 PM
I would not know how to interpret that dream of yours. You have described it well here Debbie.
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Date: 1/17/2012 6:05:00 PM
I like this very much.interesting getting inside of your head...yes....
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