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A Monkey Tale

My mom’d just had a baby And so to give her space, My nana and my grandpa Took me to a special place. We passed a toy store on the way And quickly we were stopping. I found a doll I really loved; I’d nailed this thing called shopping. My nana loved to buy me things But mom had made it clear No matter what, there was to be No toy or souvenir. I left the store dejected But we drove on to the zoo. It cheered me and improved my mood, As zoos are wont to do. I noticed something rather strange – A monkey with no cage. At five years old the danger I was not equipped to gauge. As I bent down to pet it, Its reaction was pure fright. Before I knew what happened, I’d received a monkey bite! My nana was hysterical; I guess I was as well. The doctor stitched me up And I kept up my crying spell. To calm me down, my grandpa asked How can we stop those tears? A lightbulb flashed – the doll! I said, Quite clever for my years. And so I got a brand-new doll, Accessories to match. My grandpa’s guilt was dangling Like a prize for me to catch. The lesson that I learned was this: No matter your intent, A promise made is etched in sand More often than cement.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/23/2012 4:48:00 PM
Excellent. Well versed and well rhymed. This poem had everything that I enjoy from the first word to the last. Thanks for sharing it and giving me a smile. Rockman :-)
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Date: 4/21/2012 4:42:00 AM
Absouutely priceless, love it ,what a caany gal you were xx
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Date: 4/20/2012 8:02:00 PM
hahaha, PRICELESS> you had them pegged at a very young age. I LOVE this.
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Date: 4/20/2012 5:42:00 PM
I'm sensin' the next Aesop here, with over and undertones of Silverstein. Awesome as always, ilene, good to read you, please write on! ~N
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Date: 4/20/2012 3:27:00 PM
A lovely poem, just suited to read to children.
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