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Through the brambles of the arbor's vine, an artist has spinned some silver lace This net was cradled over leaves slung low, and wet with dew. Evidence was left in place, a hammock swings as if on cue Crocheted with skill and flair to glisten in the sun Breeze trembles every curl and lair and takes the breath from you Light fondles strands of pearls it wears as the spider rests, .. to view. While the agile trace of light declines, the fragile morning soon unwinds and wears a lace of new design
........................................................ 2/25/16

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Date: 7/28/2016 6:54:00 AM
Came back to read this favorite of mine. Have a wonderful day. Luv, SuZ
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Date: 3/22/2016 11:11:00 AM
Congrats my dear ! Some poets can just create magic by just writing few lines.. You are one of them.. Brilliant... 7/7hugs Red
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Date: 3/19/2016 4:33:00 PM
You have said so much in just a few lines. Congrats!
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Date: 3/15/2016 10:57:00 AM
Carrie, Congrats on your "Fragment Of Life" win. Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/12/2016 10:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Carrie!!
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Date: 3/9/2016 8:16:00 PM
Congratulations. How beautiful, Carrie: Love this fragment of life. I am FAV'ing it. Cheers, SuZ
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Date: 3/9/2016 8:27:00 AM
Beautiful victory. Congratulations Carrie
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Date: 3/8/2016 10:08:00 PM
really wonderful Carrie.. congrats on top podium.
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Date: 3/8/2016 1:40:00 PM
Wonderful use of your words, Carrie-- a swirling design of description..I'm sure the web looked beautiful too! Congrats on your placement!
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Date: 3/7/2016 11:22:00 PM
Awesome! Great way to capture the theme by using nature. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 3/7/2016 3:26:00 PM
this is sweet and pretty. Love it, and congrats on the well deserved win.
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Date: 3/7/2016 12:41:00 PM
Carrie, this is unique congratulations on the “Fragment Of Life” contest a 7 and a fav. : ) Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/7/2016 12:28:00 PM
beautifully woven Carrie many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/7/2016 10:31:00 AM
I love where you took your theme as a 'fragment of life' Carrie. Indeed it is! Congratulations on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/7/2016 8:19:00 AM
Carrie, lovely poem...congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 2/28/2016 3:48:00 PM
Just beautifully weaved dear !
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Date: 2/27/2016 12:35:00 PM
You have spun here a marvel for yourself, verse matching the innate skill of spiders. Poetic.
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Date: 2/26/2016 11:35:00 AM
You have excellently and skillfully described one of nature's wondrous events. Beauty personified.
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Date: 2/25/2016 9:35:00 PM
Exceptional visual write,
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