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A Moment In Paradise

colors of sunset bathe our bodies as we kiss on tropical shores lover's paradise fleeting my tears stain his wartime grave Written on 3/2/2015

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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 10/20/2015 8:04:00 PM

Excellent Tanka poem.

Laura Leiser
Date: 10/20/2015 9:24:00 PM

Thank you, Nayda. Glad you enjoyed this little poem :)

Casarah Nance

Date: 3/11/2015 5:39:00 PM

Oh this is emotional, what a wonderful write you did, grats on your win :)

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/11/2015 7:51:00 PM

Thanks so much for your kind comments, Casarah. I really appreciate you stopping by! :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/9/2015 9:48:00 PM

Back with my congrats to you, Laura! Hugs, Rhonda

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/9/2015 10:41:00 PM

Thanks, Rhonda. I appreciate your kind comment :)

Skat A

Date: 3/8/2015 6:19:00 PM

LAURA, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win ~SKAT~

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/8/2015 7:26:00 PM

Thank, Skat! I appreciate your thoughtfulness :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/8/2015 11:57:00 AM

Laura, Congratulations, a mighty romantic win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/8/2015 7:24:00 PM

Thanks, Linda (my sister's name, too!) I appreciate your kind comment :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/7/2015 8:19:00 PM

Laura, stopping back to congratulate you on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/8/2015 7:22:00 PM

Thanks, Sandra! And I just knew that your Bleak Days poem would do well, and I was right! :)

Jan Allison

Date: 3/7/2015 2:53:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Laura-) Hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/8/2015 7:21:00 PM

Thanks, Jan. You are so kind!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 3/7/2015 5:59:00 AM

Hi Laura.Congrats on win...love>>>rajat

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/7/2015 12:21:00 PM

Thanks, Rajat! You have a real winner yourself! So happy for you :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2015 11:48:00 PM

A sad one in my contest. But a good one! Congrats for your win.

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/7/2015 12:14:00 AM

Thank you for choosing my poem, Andrea! So many good ones were written for this theme.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/5/2015 12:20:00 PM

Wow, Laura...this is beautiful and pulls at the heartstrings...so sad! Best wishes in the contest...hugs, Rhonda

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/5/2015 2:59:00 PM

Thank you, Rhonda. Good luck to you as well, and I appreciate your kind comments. :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 3/4/2015 9:48:00 AM

Beautiful poem on love beautifully adorned a nice picture in loving heart. The last line is sad, my lovely friend. Good luck in the contest. Loved always,bl

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/4/2015 10:42:00 AM

Thank you, BL, for your kind and encouraging comments! I am newer to haiku and tanka poetry, but enjoy the challenge of writing them very much :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/2/2015 6:52:00 PM

So beautifully done, Laura. And, for sure you've presented that unexpected twist in the last two sad lines. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/2/2015 7:49:00 PM

Thanks for your kind comment, Sandra! It's always a challenge writing these short ones (to me)!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/2/2015 10:20:00 AM

beautiful imagery- the final line is so sad:-( Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/2/2015 10:31:00 AM

Thanks, Jan! I appreciate your kind and encouraging comments!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 3/2/2015 4:04:00 AM

This is special I am sure. GL in contest. Love Laura>>>>rajat

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/2/2015 9:31:00 AM

Thanks so much, Rajat! You are very kind and encouraging and I appreciate it! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/2/2015 2:45:00 AM

- A beautiful moment to read, Laura - I wish you best of luck in the contest! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/2/2015 9:30:00 AM

Thank you, Anne Lise, for stopping by and your kind comments! I appreciate it :)

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 3/2/2015 2:22:00 AM

Nice one. I enjoyed the write.All the best in the contest.

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/2/2015 9:29:00 AM

Thank you, Njeri, for your kind and encouraging comment!