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A MISSING VALENTINE

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A MISSING VALENTINE

A crowd rest beside and around me
Still the emptiness appears to surround me
It’s been over years and years
The love in my life isn’t bears

With friends though I do some fun
But finds myself missing some one
She is my valentine, I believe
With her closeness I started to live

She made advent in my life
Now wishing to enter in her heart
The way appears quite entangled to rove
But I have a hope of love to move

I got her company
But companionship is yet rest
Living without her in life
Even for a while is a jest

She has taken my heart like fur
And I want to do the same with her
She has all rights on me, fine!
Now I want to claim some of mine

Getting her I got my life
And gaining her I’ll start living it
But till she’ll be entirely of mine
I cannot celebrate this day of valentine

In this mundane, all is there for me
Even then a sound beats in me
A missing valentine…..
A missing valentine…..

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  1. Date: 1/27/2013 9:51:00 AM
    I was a little lost but found myself at the end, it seemed sad but seemless. You my friend have my attention. Nicely done poet. I'm litsening.

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 7:58:00 PM
    Amit, sad.... but, with beauty... you will meet and feel whole again one day,.. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem with us. Have yourself a good night, always* PD

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 8:42:00 AM
    Nice poem, I enjoyed reading it.