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A Midnight Talk With the Sun

All I behold are the shades of darkness, the moon shines, the stars twinkle. But my ecstasy for your glimpse, your abundance is leaving me fidgety. My mind promenading in the blissful warmth of your heat and sparkle. On my hands, my lips, my eyes and all of me, for the touch of your gleam I crave. Though my Chassis slumbers, my heart will stay up forever. For I always feel you crawling nearer to me with each passing moment!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/19/2015 8:51:00 PM
What a unique title and great personification poem . BIG congrats.
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Date: 8/17/2015 11:17:00 PM
Nishant. Congratulations, on what you thought the Answer should be in less than 8 lines.... Always ~SKAT
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Date: 8/6/2015 11:08:00 AM
Dear Nishant Patil, a beautiful poem craving for the sunrise....sunshine... I enjoyed reading it a lot ! Its meaning is deep heralding a new hope! Good choice of words! Kudos!! Love, Anulaxmi
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Nishant Patil
Date: 8/8/2015 5:24:00 AM
Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 8/6/2015 10:01:00 AM
I think this is kind of whimsical, personifying the sun in engaging a conversation with it. Enjoyed
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Nishant Patil
Date: 8/8/2015 5:24:00 AM
Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it.

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