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A Message In a Bottle

A new life and new generation has begun, a fresh start in a new world. But there are certain things- time is one,which tests and plays with you and always changing and never still. Though its a new phase of time there are things which remain intact. let this be a paradise, where peace and honesty prevails. A place where women are secure, and babies get their share of love, and treat nature as our own mother with utmost care and respect. Never bargain inner peace and love for money and luxuries. cherish the golden hearts of the people and do not be harsh by the tongue. Make it a place more beautiful than heaven where even gods long/desire to descend .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/3/2014 7:50:00 PM
I would love to see this in all the world. A GREAT message in a bottle this is.
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 2/7/2014 2:03:00 AM
thank you so much for reading.
Date: 3/14/2013 11:59:00 AM
This is so beautiful my friend! Life is made up of many chapters... birth, as a young child, a teenager, a newly wed, children, success in the business world, advancing years, and best time of all... retirement! If you're one of the lucky ones like me, each chapter is a hoot! Nice poem... hugs, Jack
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 3/14/2013 10:36:00 PM
thank you so much :). life in itself is beautiful when going through different phases.
Date: 2/6/2013 10:13:00 AM
simple but beautiful poem thanks for sharing.
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 2/7/2013 6:45:00 AM
thank you :)

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