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A Melting Candle Sits

A melting candle Is, atop mine open sill As a refuge through and through What breaks the twilight swill Pierces blackened night And in proxy cries the fiery light A time to oft enflames to flicker Against fighting odds and winds do kill But, the wax it softens flowing thicker Becomes molten liquid, pure As teardrops, drips of life go quicker Falling down, surround a hardening heart As half lit shadows begin to stir Across an ever nebulous mind of sorts And where a solemn figure sits Waiting for return of love's visage Past into waning hours Hoping its presence shall soon pay a visit In the touch of tomorrow's lips

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/30/2012 9:39:00 AM
A very exclusive words you used here. I love how you ended it. Thanks for stopping by my page, Michael :)
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Date: 4/26/2012 11:35:00 AM
Beautiful poem, like it!! xoxo love - Laila
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Date: 4/24/2012 11:28:00 AM
An elegantly crafted poem. Vivid imagery that captures the essence of the poem. A broken heart is never mended by sitting still waiting for lost love's return. No, it only hardens the heart. Lovely poetry, thanks for sharing.
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Date: 4/24/2012 8:54:00 AM
This is very good. I enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 4/21/2012 12:10:00 PM
This has a haunting feel to it.. Wishing that the candle continue to burn while waiting for something or someone.. Okay that's just my ten cents lol.. Enjoyed this Michael, hope your weekend is a great one ;-)
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