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A Mate For Moses

I bought him a mate, a pretty bird. He sat there, sullen, nary a word. He wasn't polite, he would not share. So she pushed him off his swing and she sat there. He pushed her back, no gentleman, he. She plunked down beside him most begrudgingly. So the swing they share, not because of affection. It's the best seat in the house by unanimous election. He glares at her, she glares at him. My hopes of baby budgies are now somewhat slim.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/22/2013 3:02:00 PM
They sound like perfect mates to me! Love It! RAY
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Date: 4/19/2013 9:47:00 PM
Hello Francine, Congratulations IN HONOR OF Andrea's favorite POEM contest. *Always & Forever' @->- LINDA -<-@
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Date: 4/19/2013 9:23:00 PM
Many congrats my dear poet friend Francine! This is indeed great and amazing ! I love it & so enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing and the smiles here! Have a grace-filled day! Love and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 4/19/2013 8:37:00 PM
Francine, a sweet win~*~SKAT
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Date: 3/18/2013 12:53:00 PM
Francine, this is so cute! Congrats on your win with this lighthearted write! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/15/2013 5:12:00 AM
Belated congratulations on your win! Lori
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Date: 3/13/2013 7:57:00 PM
Congrats, Francine. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 3/10/2013 10:39:00 PM
Wonderful write and win. Many Congrats.
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Date: 3/10/2013 8:46:00 AM
Oh no! A great write... poor little guys... a divorce may be in order...
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Date: 3/9/2013 7:34:00 PM
Francine.. "CONGRATULATIONS!" and goodnight ;-)...PD
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Date: 2/8/2011 6:05:00 PM
A cute write with great descriptive words and rhyming.
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Date: 9/20/2010 7:53:00 AM
This is a real delight to read, Francine. Enjoyed. Love, Audrey
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Date: 9/19/2010 11:48:00 AM
Enjoyed stopping by to say hi while reading your poetry, have yourself a wonderful day full of love & joy. Keep them smiles coming*luv ~SKAT
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Date: 9/19/2010 3:54:00 AM
Very funny and expressive, neither budgie will budge eh? You've got no hope Francine! Are you sure they're not both Misters or maybe sisters? Gordon, (hicky)
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Date: 9/18/2010 7:12:00 AM
Are you sure that you have male and female?Doris ended up with two female love birds and they don't love..Enjoyed the expressiveness of your work..I am glad that I chose this one to read this morn..Sara
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Date: 9/17/2010 9:56:00 PM
I once had a budgie myself. Hope these two can work it out. Great write. Dan C
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Date: 9/17/2010 7:30:00 PM
CUTE CUTE CUTE. Gotta fav it. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/17/2010 11:09:00 AM
Those birds are not so social when you want them to be. LOVED it so funny!!
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Date: 9/17/2010 9:50:00 AM
Really funny, Francine. Poor Moses!! Have a great weekend, Diane
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Date: 9/17/2010 9:22:00 AM
As the week ends I find myself reading and enjoying the many diverse poems here at PoetrySoup today. I am glad to see your poetry among these Francine. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/17/2010 8:56:00 AM
well done, cute. thanks, chuck
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Date: 9/17/2010 8:02:00 AM
Made me chuckle this one Francine. May there be little chirps ahead >> James
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Date: 9/16/2010 8:14:00 PM
Very cute Francine... birds are territorial in their own way luv... keep the cover off tonight.. enjoyed ..
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Date: 9/16/2010 7:13:00 PM
:) You have me laughing thinking about Moses has reacted to the new bird in the cage, Francine. Funny poem! I love the last two lines. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/16/2010 6:50:00 PM
give it time and a little wine
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