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A Matchbox In the Rain

Unprotected piece of a house exposed to fierce drops of water prone to melt away in mud like a music box in a matchbox, unbelievable and unnecessary and yet there, a dwelling of husband and wife to nest and breed their young willing to go away and build their own music matchboxes, stronger and safer yet still exposed to the ruthless transparency of falling water.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/21/2013 11:45:00 AM
Compelling read!
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Date: 8/20/2012 1:44:00 AM
Wow! Very evocative
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Archontoula Alexandropoulou
Date: 8/20/2012 4:29:00 AM
Kind as always, Bill. Thanks.
Date: 8/10/2012 12:18:00 PM
nice write AA
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Archontoula Alexandropoulou
Date: 8/20/2012 4:29:00 AM
Thank you, Richard. I liked your poems verymuch, too.
Date: 8/7/2012 5:09:00 AM
Like it - very well written poem. - Have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Archontoula Alexandropoulou
Date: 8/10/2012 11:26:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. Have a lovely day as well Archontoula

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