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A Love Story

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I loved She laughed I cried She mocked my advances I lowered my head in shame She walked out of my life forever I died

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Funom Makama

Date: 4/4/2015 6:59:00 AM

Absolutely wonderful! Its a blessed and wonderful weekend for me, chilling out with poetic lines so fine and touching

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/6/2015 9:47:00 PM

Thank you so much Funom

Kp Nunez

Date: 3/28/2015 1:27:00 PM

If not for the pic, I would have cried too...thank you for including it then. Another 7. Such incredible talent. Why are you not posting lately? Happy to see your avatar today, though. :)

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/6/2015 9:47:00 PM

I am a clown even in death!

Kelly Deschler

Date: 3/26/2015 10:34:00 PM

The death of the heart. I know what that feels like, but I am still hangin' on and tomorrow is a new day... Great expression in so few lines. Nice work, Arthur!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/6/2015 9:46:00 PM

Well if you ever wanna meet a dead man, gimme a ring!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 3/23/2015 6:39:00 PM

I think you figured out that picture dead on. As dark as is this write I have to admit the wheels of your mind turning gave me a chuckle as well as made my spine tingle!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/6/2015 9:46:00 PM

Sometimes I think I am driving with a flat tire!! :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/17/2015 1:05:00 AM

Wow the picture is worth a thousand words! The kind of pain too many can understand, but a person like the one you describe, she doesn't seem worth it...hugs, Rhonda

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/6/2015 9:45:00 PM

Thanks Rhonda!!! :)

Constance La France

Date: 3/16/2015 3:48:00 PM

Arthur this is deep stuff and that photo is so dark and chilling but I like the poem and thanks for your comment on my poetry

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/16/2015 8:25:00 PM

Thank you too Broken Wings!

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 3/16/2015 9:50:00 AM

oh i know that very feeling were they hold your hands laugh and make promises to your family then cast you to the darkness beautifully crafted dear pal excellent lov e story bless you in your heart of love arthur wishing you a blessed beautiful st patricks day

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/16/2015 8:24:00 PM

Thank you liam, cheers!

Casarah Nance

Date: 3/16/2015 7:25:00 AM

ahh such your style, nicely done. hugsxx

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/16/2015 8:24:00 PM

Thank you Cas, nice to hear from someone who has such style!!!

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 3/15/2015 11:36:00 PM

Very nice pen Arthur! That's one hell of a love story gone very bad you've paint us here, my dear friend. That very dramatic picture enhance it to. Very sad poem! Really sorry about it since is not fictional. A 7 from me. Wishing you a lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :) D.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/15/2015 11:38:00 PM

Thank you kindly Dorian!