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A Love Note To Michael

My friend says Michael fancies me Mandy’s written on the board and I thinks it is me. He has drawn a love heart with an arrow going through it It’s not very good I’ll show him how to draw it. I practiced putting his surname after mine And I practice signing Mrs all of the time I really hope it is me he fancies cos I think he’s great I’m going to stand by the bus stop and say that’s it late Maybe if I ‘m lucky cos I know he comes this way And then maybe we could get on the late bus today. I’m scared and nervous he’s such a good looking boy His name is on my book, but I’m going to play coy If he talks to me I will just faint away Oh no he’s on that bus and he’s going the wrong way.
For Micheal's contest "Passing a Love Note" by Mandy Tams And thanks for the kind thought and taking me back to thirteen that I missed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/27/2014 10:58:00 AM
still love this, inspiring, an event within your complexity
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Date: 10/30/2012 6:35:00 AM
wow still finding so many that i have not read poems, Mandy,, this is really lovely, and a deserved winner number i believe, brilliant, you light up so many lives with your poetry....
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Harry Horsman
Date: 10/30/2012 6:36:00 AM
number 1, i believe...
Date: 4/20/2012 6:09:00 PM
Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 4/16/2012 1:27:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this great love note..Sara
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Date: 4/16/2012 11:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Michael's "Passing A Love Note" contest Mandy. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/15/2012 5:12:00 PM
This very lovely and sweet,Mandy.Wonderful romantic love note.Congrats on your 1st place win..Well deserved.......
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Date: 4/14/2012 11:06:00 PM
Congrats Mandy on your wonderful first place win with this sweet love note! Blessings, Rhonda
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 4/15/2012 1:11:00 AM
Thanks Rhonda I feel very proud xx
Date: 4/14/2012 12:20:00 PM
Memories of my best years ....congrats on this winning write. :) Gwendolen
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 4/15/2012 1:12:00 AM
I am sure your best are yet to come, thankyou xx
Date: 4/14/2012 10:54:00 AM
Yes, I too remember being 13, and all those fantasies were so thrilling. What a trip down memory lane, thanks for that, Mandy! Congratulations on an adorable poem!
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 4/15/2012 1:14:00 AM
Thanks Carrie I wish I had those memories I had to imagine what it would have been like to recieve a note back then xx
Date: 4/14/2012 9:18:00 AM
congrats Mandy on a fantastic first place win for this cutesy luv note luv..
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 4/15/2012 1:15:00 AM
Thanks Sweetheart I appreciate that xx
Date: 4/14/2012 7:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place.
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 4/15/2012 1:17:00 AM
Thanks Joann xx
Date: 4/14/2012 7:08:00 AM
:D Congratulations!!! ~GG~ on your #1 win!!! LOL...well done...big hugs,love deb
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 4/15/2012 1:18:00 AM
Thanks Deb xxooxx
Date: 4/14/2012 7:07:00 AM
Congrats on your 1st place in my contest!!!! You have won my book " A Walk Through Time" soup mail me where to send it.... luv Michael
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 4/15/2012 1:19:00 AM
Thanks Michael I feel honored and like a kid with a lolly . Can't thank you on your blog I have a system error that is stopping me commenting on blogs the mo, have souped you details.
Date: 4/6/2012 10:50:00 AM
How sweet that you saw Micaels "love heart" on the blackboard. Teens are so confused about ove and I like the way you dream about being his wife. Playing co might work, but please don't "faint away." We'd miss you, Mandy. Best wishes n Michael's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/6/2012 2:36:00 AM
Oh so teenie bopper sweet! So many familiar moments of my childhood in here, Mandy...memory lane for sure!...Happiest of Easters. Love, Gwendolen
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Date: 4/5/2012 9:04:00 AM
cute and funny
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Date: 4/4/2012 10:19:00 PM
An excellent entry for the contest, Mandy! This really takes me back a few years. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 4/4/2012 7:59:00 AM
hey Mandy a great entree for the contest, best of luck ..was it the number 42???.David
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Date: 4/4/2012 7:22:00 AM
good luck in the contest Mandy... enjoed
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 4/4/2012 7:37:00 AM
Thanks Joseph y or no y xx
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Joseph May
Date: 4/4/2012 7:23:00 AM
sorry forgot the y
Date: 4/4/2012 7:06:00 AM
Thanks Vie it could have been a Freudian slip xx
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