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- a Lot of Candy -

I eat caramel so it slams Pink cotton candy tastes like jam Chocolate melts in my mouth Licorice laces eaten meters and meters Sour candies gives me tears in my eyes Lollipops how sweet and delicious No and no mom, I`m so sticky and I have such pain in my teeth 19. June. 2012 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 8/1/2013 3:26:00 PM

Lovely write,now heres me going to get me one also.Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/1/2013 3:29:00 PM

- Mustapha, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/11/2012 9:46:00 AM

you have got me going here, i'm just reaching into the lolly Jar,, like this fun poem...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/11/2012 9:49:00 AM

Harry, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 8/17/2012 12:38:00 PM

Very very cute! :D Always, Laura

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/17/2012 12:39:00 PM

Laura, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Robert Pettit

Date: 7/12/2012 2:23:00 PM

Oral bacteria turn the sucrose into pyruvic acid, and that in turn erodes the teeth. Brushing your teeth is so important.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/13/2012 8:09:00 AM

Robert, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Cindy Cayton

Date: 6/29/2012 4:52:00 AM

Oh by the way, before you bake them, take a fork and flatten them out by making a mark with the fork vertically and horizonally. :) next week short bread ccokies, its easy, used to make them for the kids when they wanted something sweet, and we didn't have much. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/29/2012 6:51:00 AM

I will try....thank you. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Cindy Cayton

Date: 6/29/2012 4:47:00 AM

I got your sweet com, I'll give you a simple recipe for perfect peanut butter cookies everytime... remember 1, 1, and 1 I cup peanut butter I Icup of Sugar I egg preheat oven at 350 degrees bake for 8-10 minutes They are scruptious, and they don't even have flour in them. I was amazed! Have a great day, before long, you'll be the cookie Queen... :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/29/2012 6:50:00 AM

Thank you Cindy.....you are the cookie Queen. :) - oxox love Anne-Lise

Courtney Courtney

Date: 6/28/2012 1:17:00 PM

to much sweets

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/28/2012 1:24:00 PM

Yes, to much - thank you Ruth for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Gail Debole

Date: 6/28/2012 5:19:00 AM

Hi Anne Lise - I am probably going to have to have some candy today! Your poem has inspired my taste buds. - Gail

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/28/2012 7:16:00 AM

Gail, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Laurel Larison

Date: 6/26/2012 6:51:00 AM

that is very good. I loved candy as a child, It was one thing I looked forward too. Great write my friend !

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/26/2012 6:54:00 AM

Laurel, thank you for visit and comments my Candy. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Matthew Anish

Date: 6/24/2012 9:32:00 AM

One might gain weight simply by reading this poem! Tasty work! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/24/2012 10:09:00 AM

Matthew, thank you for visit my Candy poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Audrey Haick

Date: 6/23/2012 1:20:00 PM

: )) This is tempting and as sweet as the candies described, Anne Lise. Thanks for commenting on my latest. Yes, I've been away for awhile. Love, Annalise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/23/2012 1:24:00 PM

Annalise, thank you for visit and comments my Candy poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Kasim Ishmael

Date: 6/23/2012 11:51:00 AM

hello my friend anne lise i like candy too ,very nice like itand you make me want to eat some candy right now

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/23/2012 1:23:00 PM

Kasim, thank you for visit and comments my small poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Cindy Lu

Date: 6/23/2012 11:24:00 AM

aw, a very sweet poem literally in all aspects. Thank you for always supporting my poetry. Appologies for not remarking yours more oft. Much Love, Cindy

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/23/2012 11:28:00 AM

Cindy, thank you for visit and comments my small poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Don Johnson

Date: 6/23/2012 3:56:00 AM

sounds about right, sore teeth night, love it ...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/23/2012 4:20:00 AM

Don, thank you for visit and comments my small poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Jancarl Campi

Date: 6/23/2012 2:53:00 AM

Wow!! You do love sweets! I am a chocolate hound myself. Have a great day, Jancarl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/23/2012 4:19:00 AM

Jancarl, thank you for visit and comments my small poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Dalila Agtani

Date: 6/23/2012 1:14:00 AM

Indeed you are so sweet Anne Lise! I may need some of your chocolates now before I brush my teeth! Thanks for patronizing my corner. Love Dalila

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/23/2012 2:28:00 AM

Dalila, thank you for visit and comments my small poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Peggy Caulfield

Date: 6/22/2012 4:39:00 PM

My son says he loves the poem. So do I. I guess it's because it's sweet and sticky. Can you soup mail me some chocolates. You have my sweet tooth aching.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/23/2012 2:27:00 AM

Big hug to your son! Thank you - and mom to. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Carma Sanderson

Date: 6/22/2012 4:35:00 PM

" I loved every minute of this sweet candy SENSATION, Anne-Lise... As my teeth fall out on this one, LOL!!!! Xox0 Carma, SWEETHEART

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/23/2012 2:26:00 AM

Carma, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/21/2012 7:37:00 PM

a yummy tasty treat in sweet lines of candy goo so tempting puts a smile on my face Anne Lise.. chocolate kissws to the rescue luv..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/22/2012 12:40:00 AM

L-M - thank you for visit and comments my small poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/21/2012 3:06:00 PM

awww LOL you had to go ruin it by reminding me of MY TEETH LOL..my fav is licorice..black & full of molasses! Light & Love

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/22/2012 12:39:00 AM

Debbie, thank you for visit and comments my small poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Erich Goller

Date: 6/21/2012 1:36:00 PM

All that sweet will do that. A lovely sweet delicious poem.I enjoyed reading it,God bless you. Hugs!Erich

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/21/2012 1:40:00 PM

Erich, thank you for visit and comments my small poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/21/2012 12:54:00 PM

you are my candy girl, anne... have a fine day!!..:) hugggs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/21/2012 12:59:00 PM

Welcome to have some candy,Nette - oxox love Anne-Lise

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 6/21/2012 11:32:00 AM

Sounds a nightmare to me I dislike anything sweet, nice write though xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/21/2012 11:36:00 AM

Mandy, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/21/2012 11:19:00 AM

Anne Lise, you sure have a lot of candy floating around in this delightful write of yours.. This made me smile tonight.. Hope your week is an awesome one, love & hugs Wilma

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/21/2012 11:23:00 AM

Wilma, thank you for tasted my Candy - oxox love Anne-Lise

Diane Christian

Date: 6/21/2012 9:55:00 AM

aww how sweet i love chocholate caramel and shoe lases and candy flos yummy, ans thanks for your kind comments

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/21/2012 9:58:00 AM

Diane, thank you for tasted the Candy - oxox love Anne-Lise