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A Longing

Hollow inside It sounds shallow Rain drops on rooftop That noise must stop I squeeze it, otherwise. Birds fly Far over the sky Who cares? I can’t see anyway But I pretend. Everything dries up empty My heart still bleeds I wait, and puff Till you come And slash it.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/1/2015 9:06:00 AM
The author uses good imagery and maintains a poetic flow through the whole piece. Your poem say a lot with little wording and that is hard to do. Emile.
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Nirode Ray
Date: 5/1/2015 8:38:00 PM
Emile, thank you very much for your upbeat comment.

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